:'( It makes me so depressed cause I know whats going to happen to him.

But really good story so far! :)

OH MY GOD!

A FELLOW MINE EYES HAVE SEEN FAN! *huggles* I love that book. Dauphin... *crys* I actually saw a picture of him somewhere, oh SO HOTT! *pants* Anyways, my best buddy Ari who made me read "Mine Eyes Have Seen" Is tottally going to read this. YOU BETTER WRITE MORE MISSY! *holds chibi hammer threateningly*

I'm going to go cry over a certin curly blonde headed babe. See ya.

-Len

well, since u seem so desperate for critique, from one 7th grader to another, good job! I expect to see a 3erd chapter soon.

hello! um this is an interestin review cuz i havent actually read ur story i just wanted to give u props on the summary very funny

It's good to see an Ann Rinaldi fic that actually has something to do with one of her books. Good Work!