Very sweet and in character for everyone. Interesting little hint of slash there.

just missed being rated as soft porn. Nicely written though. I'm curious about the 18th Birthday though. Why pick 18? Given his years in the phantom zone, the years spent wandering space before he met Shadow lass plus the time spent, in his own time period, back in our 29th Century...

Not bad, though next time, ixnay on the 'roseate' eh? A bit too trite.