*fans self* Very steamy! I'd love to see more from you, even though it's been 4 years. Lovely work with this.

~fd97

Yay! *flaps chibi arms* I was worried for a while, thought I was the only fan of them...Imagining the scream the male characters make when they die--putting that with this fic made me laugh so hard...! More chapters!

AW MY GAWD! **! You've destroyed the dignity of the two characters! I'm sory but I just can't help feeling... sick!
I thought I'd never see the stuff Brokeback Mountain's made of in Final Fantasy Tactics! Aw man I feel so depressed right now... But I congratulate you for being original and... er... daring.

You should be satsified with that. It was sweet, brilliant! And I thought I was the only one that thought the hill scene was far too sexually tensed . . .

Lovely... Get the hormones going I tell you that and that I knew what you were talking about with that scene. The first time I saw that, I thought, that's just a situation wait to happen. :P

Hope you write more the like. :D

~Amber

This is a great retelling of one scene from the game. It flows well with good description and set up for the situation. The dialouge is decent, though a little random at times. Oh, and props for using the actual dialogue from the game. :-)
Only criticism would be the use of certain euphamisms that either made me giggle or laugh outright, such as "secret entrance". Just a slight distraction from the story - but nothing that impacted it greatly.
Over all, a nice story.

O_O *drools all over teh ficcy* Awesome...

Nice~! Definitely liked it, I was planning on writing a fanfic for the game dedicated to those two as well (Since, sadly, there are hardly any around. I think this is only the third one I've ever found). Anyway, I still like it! You should write more chapters, but only if you become inspired to. Yosha, yosha. xD

I'd like to see more of this and how it affects the game as well ^_^

Good Job! I think it's great. Keep on writing!

You've just got to continue writing this. I would love to see how their relationship effects the game.