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| virgo 2007-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseT-T heero... |
| riya-chan 2005-08-12 ch 1,  | abuseThis story is unique in the way that it's being told from beyond the grave (considering it's in first person and encompasses the narrator's death). It almost feels natural that the story would continue on to a second chapter in Heero's perspective as he observes Duo dealing with his death. If continued, not only would the story have a stronger sense of completeness, but also the use of first person narrative in a dead character would to a certain extent be justified. |
| Animegoil 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseOMG, and at the end you just killed him? How horrible... wah Awesome fic. Loved all the details and the emotion and the hardships... incredibly written. Really really...how sad... poor them! *tear tear* Wow, you just did really well. Characterization was great, and you did a good job of maintaining Heero IC, which is something i find really hard to do when writing in first person from his point of view. So sad, but so well done! |
| she got me hooked! 2003-11-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love the way you wrote this story! Writing in the first person is always really, really hard, and I applaud you for your amazingability to make it seem real. Even though I don't usually agree with the yaoi view of Heero and Duo, this story almost had me convinced! Great job! yours She hooked me on anime and there is nothing I can do about it! |
| Dream Keeper 2003-08-18 ch 1, | abuse*glares* You're so mean! *lol* Oh well, I loved the story. Plot line was wonderful. You need to write an epiloge to tell what happens to Duo. Does he kill himself, does he keep on living under mounds of paperwork, does he find love elsewhere, etc etc etc... Okay, keep up the good work! |
| x1-TaKeN-oVeR 2003-08-15 ch 1, | abuse:Looks up at Sissani-san: ...is Hee-chan really dead? Is the fic over? Please make another chapter! You just can't leave it there. :Sobbing hysterically: You just can't... |
| SleepSweetPetite 2003-08-15 ch 1, | abuseAGH! That was so sad! And so beautifully written! ;_; This was so sad...and yet I couldn't stop reading! |
| violet 2003-08-14 ch 1, anon. | abusei loved this, the detail and the personalits, the dog, just absalutly loved this fic. |
| Daughter of Night 2003-08-14 ch 1, | abuse::dries her tears:: That was... intense. I normal stay far, far away from deathfics because I hate crying, but this was really well written. I've seen the movie Wit, so I knew how it was going to end, and I *still* hoped it would turn out okay. Once more; a great fic! |
| The Manwell 2003-08-14 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this. What a lovely one-shot fic. Intense and very realistic. Very beautiful. |