   Fantome 2003-10-05 . chapter 6Very original! Again, you've used a sweet little connection to nature to endear Erik to me even more. The laughter at the end made me happy. |
| Fantome 2003-10-05 . chapter 5 "So all my suffering will not be in vain:" great last line. Nice mix of a child's poem with adult hopes for love and happiness. |
| Fantome 2003-10-05 . chapter 4 Lovely description of a sunset. Erik manages to find happiness in simple things. |
| Fantome 2003-10-05 . chapter 3 Very sweet! Cute snowman idea! I like this one a lot. Great idea! |
| Fantome 2003-10-05 . chapter 2 Erik could have been such a famous singer. He's only a "normal person" at night: nice foreshadowing. Very sweet to imagine Erik using moonlight as a spotlight, great idea! |
| Fantome 2003-10-05 . chapter 1 Very sad comparison. He wants a simple life and to run free like a deer with a little love. "No matter how hard I try/It will always be the same" for poor Erik. |
| The Phantom Parisienne 2003-09-24 . chapter 6 Aww! This is so sweet...*smiles* Well done! |
| TPP 2003-09-05 . chapter 5 I was just thinking...this could be set to music. What sort of music, I do not know, but music of some kind...I envision Michael Crawford singing it, actually. :D :D
Beautiful poem! Perhaps my favourite of your little Erik poems... |
 Eloise Moonbright 2003-08-26 . chapter 4Aw... These were so sad yet so adorable. I especialy liked his friend made of snow. You should write more like these. |
| The Phantom Parisienne 2003-08-25 . chapter 4 This really brightened my day! I seem to have started something with the genre of child Erik...j/k, but it seems almost true, no? *snerfs*
The third poem was so incredibly sweet...I adored it! The mental picture of Ewik (as I call child Erik) building a snowman is just too precious for words. Long live Ewik! |
 Chibi Hime 2003-08-18 . chapter 1Aww1 What a sad little poem.
Little Erik pieces are one of my favorite PhanPhic categories. Nice job! |
| The Phantom's Mask 2003-08-16 . chapter 1 Lovely... absolutely lovely! And so very depressingly... true! I loved it. Well done ~ K |
| The Phantom Parisienne 2003-08-15 . chapter 2 Aww...cheer up...a review! ^^ This was sweet...Poor poor child Erik...he deserves more love. Wonderful poem. ^-^ |
| The Phantom Parisienne 2003-08-14 . chapter 1 EE!! Little Erik poetry! *runs in circles, happily* Thank you so much for brightening up my day...I've felt ill since 8 this morning, so thankie!
The metaphor with the fawn and the doe in comparison to Erik and his mother was quite clever. ^-^ Kudos to you!
Quite realistic, and very touching. Congrats! ^^ |
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