That was really sad but brilliantly written bcoz that would've probably happened that way.

Aw poor Dominique. Sion and her is so cute together. Well anyway nice, well written. Good fic.

Aw! What a beautiful story!
So sad and wistful.
Great job!

Aww so angsty, I love that! ^_^

And yet so true huh?

Please keep up the good work!!

~NAA

a little confusing but it was ok! so if your gonna make another one then make it a little more like... um... i dunno make it like so that people can maybe understand it better. Don't get mad cause i like it just i didn't understand it that well so yeah.