OMG! *Starts sobbing uncontrollably* g-g-giv-vme-e-e a-a m-m-mm-minut-te. *twenty minutes later*
Oh Gosh that was so good, Im still sobbing. I feel so sad tho now, I cant believe hes really gone! (as you can see I realate to Helga WAY Too much(our personalities are very close)) It was sweet though, I liked it!
Tin

great story, very interesting plot, however, to me it may seem to be a tad rushed, but overall a GREAT idea!

o a sweet short fanfic. i like it! plz write other like it! signed the worm

wow, that was good. depressing, but good anyway.

aw that was so fluffy and cute i loved it!

WAH! DATS SO SAD! So, what's gonna happen to Helga? update soon! I think this is gonna be a great fic!

Arielle.

such a good story it brought tears.plz write another

Very short story. The ending was too abrupt. Too bad Arnold died.

You might want to have each character in a seperate paragraph when they speak, so it will be more organized.

I notice you used the word "threw" twice. I think you meant to use the word "through". Just in case you didn't know.

That was a cute surprise that Arnold had a locket with Helga's picture in it. They both had a secret. Too bad Helga was the only one to find out. But too late.

Okay, that story really made me cry, it was so depressing! (I take it that was the end but I'm not sure) Anyway, good story, but Arnold shouldn't of died! *sob*...;(