 abregaza 2003-09-01 . chapter 1Beautiful, I always enjoy your writing because you have a descriptive flair that gets into my mind and runs like a movie. |
 WyldeGod 2003-08-27 . chapter 1Impressive little thought there. I like it. Interesting how simple walking seemed to have been and now... how complicated life is. Good stuff! |
 Fair Cate 2003-08-23 . chapter 1This isnt the sort odfd thing I normally read, but I really like it! You have really given an in-depth picture of post-pulse US, keep it up |
 Kyre 2003-08-19 . chapter 1I love these reflections on the Pulse and how it changed every detail of American life, disrupting even the smallest pleasures. Well done. Thanks for this. |
 Willa Mitty 2003-08-17 . chapter 1Wow! The feel of this is perfect! Some nice little observances of post-Pulse America! |
 Hearns 2003-08-16 . chapter 1Hey This is a great story, Keep other stories like this coming.
You caputure the mood of Post-Pulse Seattle very well, I could feel what the woman was saying as she was walking on the streets of Seattle.
Thank you for a great peice of fiction.
We want more...
Hearn |
 JoJo 2003-08-15 . chapter 1 Nice Piece. ^_~ |
 Kasman 2003-08-15 . chapter 1Another great mood piece. Well done. |