Wow. That was really good! *claps* Very powerful. I love what Dumbledore said.

"This time, Marietta, no-one you...betrayed...died. But the consequences could have been worse than they were. A war is starting, Marietta. You will have to choose a side."

BRILLIANT line! Great job!

Um...someone is actually sympathetic towards that traitor Marietta?? Weird...

It was good! Good idea to write a fic about Marietta. Everyone hates her, and she hasn't a lot of character development. You have made her plaisible, and Dumbledore is cool.

I love what Dumbledore tells Marietta about betrayal. Very... darnit, can't come up with the right word. Powerful? Yeah.

You've definitely come up with a new angle. Excellent job. I hope you continue this. I'd like to see what happens to Marietta next.

wow this was good she got what she deserved wouldnt cho be pissed at her? im mean she did betray cho too

Wow, that was great! Seriously, it was really well-written, and realistic. Also, I like how you can focus on a character that doesn't have much importance in the story.