Good story; too bad it's over. Only thing I didn't like is the fact that Bellatrix didn't get her pretty ass kicked more...that bitch got on my nerves. But well written. Looking forward to Part II.

*sniff* It's OVER? That's IT? NO! Ok, I'm all better! Hey, E-mail me, k? maybe we could collaberate on our stories or something, I dunno. just a thought! my email address is byebye

I really loved your story :)

Hope you will write more soon!

AH! YOU-YOU! YOU S-S-SAID THE 'OUR FATHER'! AH :runs away and curls up in a corner whilts muttering about the 'Our Father':

Bakura aka snowflake aka Kura-chan: Er... I think wut she meant was that it was a good chapter and that you better post the other one or she'll castertate you! How do I know you ask? Well I'm in her head I know her every thought! _ Bye now!

*BlackLadyOfDoom and Kura-chan

Whatever... *yawn*

*BlackLadyOfDoom (is to tiered to say anything)

PS I do want to update though! K? **yawn** Bye! **yawn**

Heh, she got powers! Well I must admit hers is quite astonishing! What the hell, I luv it! I luv spiders! hehehehehehe They're so interesting, how they eat and kill and stuff! Anybobs great chappee!

*BlackLadyOfDoom

IT BURNED! IT BURNED! HEHEHEHEHE Andie burned the grass! Shame on her! !

*BlackLadyOfDoom

SATAN! ... ... O.K. I'm calm now...

Random Person:No ur not! -_-

UR RIGHT I'M NOT! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... O.k. now I am...

R/P: ::roles eyes:: Whatever...

*eh-hem* anyway, YAY! He got his powers! YAY!

*BlackLadyOfDoom

(O)_(O) They kissed...::shivers:: Ew!

*BlackLadyOfDoom

HEH, You know I just noticed that in the second paragraph where it says -he tried so hard, and got so far, but in the end it doesn't even matter- aren't those the lyrics for Linkin Park's song In Th End? Well not exact lyrics but kinda the same.I thought so. It took me the second time to read to figure it out. LOL I'm observant! -_- Like I've said b4; Great story!

*BlackLadyOfDoom

Wow! you have very little reviws! I'm sorry! It's really a great story, I wonder why they don't review! Maybe they have no fingers? :shrugs:: oh well! I still like it! Please post the other chapees!

*BlackLadyOfDoom

I have reviewed your story! Muhahahahahahaha! Now you must post all those other chapters that you did on your last one! I really like this story, so keep it up and don't even think about quitting!

Pyro a.k.a Rayeanna

I am far too depressed to say much but I have to say the following:

You have to post up the other chapters, really you HAVE to! K?

Oh, and well you know the deal, I think the story's great, always have and always will! K? :smiles weakly: Bye!

*BlackLadyOfDoom

good story! You have to finish it Please!

Your Fan

Lyn

Nice writing style, and a promising first chapter. I like it. That's high praise from me.

I was wondering if you would be interested in joining my Harry Potter Online Roleplaying game. There we roleplay as though we are students attending the magical school Salem. This includes going to classes, making friends, having adventures, ect. The link is:

http:/w.geocities.com/headmaster_cromwell/

Hope you'll come join us. :) Cheers!