Wow. This story is brilliant. I felt really sorry for Victor losing everyone he had ever known, thank goodness Virgil returned.

=D great story bub! keep those thudnerbirds story comming up ;)

A great story. I couldn't read it all in one go, but every time I left it, I just couldn't wait to get back. I thought it was good the way you kept Virgil/Victor in character (mending the pump, saving the boy from the well) even when he didn't know who he was.

That story was absolutely amazing! I would have been reviewing all the way but most of the time I noticed and read your additions before leaving for placement, so didn't always have time, so I'll review it all now. Not that there's much to comment on. It's all really good.
That is probably the best Thunderbirds story I've ever read, way better than anything I've written, too. So much emotion so accurately described, just want to know how Penny'll react! Hehe!
Only thing I'd comment on really is the spelling of Kyrano ;-) Aside from that it's all amazing!

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I think this has to rank among one of the best stories I have read. The ending was just right. Short and sweet. Gordon's final words brought the whole tale full circle.

I read your previous stories 'Hostage' and 'The Rescuer's Rescue', and there is no doubt about it that you have a really good writing style, and strong story development skills. I'm glad that you decided to rewrite and complete this story. It has been rewarding from start to finish.

At last!! Virgil is back. Let's hope that knock to the head brings back the man we love.Excellent premise of Virgil getting in trouble in the TB2 hanger. This is such a rewarding story. Please update soon.

It looks like Virgil may be going to get that second bang to the head after all. As well as to every thing else. It's a long drop from the bottom of that chute to the bottom of the hanger !

This is getting really good.

Keep it coming.

*sob* Poor Tracys...will the amnesia ever let up? I'm eager to see how Virgil reacts when he finally remembers his past. *pause, and then suspicously* he will remember, right? Please say he'll remember!! Please!!

Well...that's all for now. Keep posting!! You've got a live one here!! *bows with a florish and makes her exit*

Like the title of this chapter.LOL! The Tracy's are going to have to work ver hard to convince Victor/Virgil that they are his family. The amnesia shows no signs of wearing off, and I think his reactions to these 'strangers' are entirely plausible.

Was very sad that you killed off Teresa, but you are obvously keeping the story 'mean and lean', by getting rid of those characters that have served their purpose. Good for you. So far this has been a very focused rewrite, and very rewarding for the reader. Update when you can:-)

I can almost here Jeff say "I am your father luke!"

This is aweseom I still say Virg should get another wack on the head thoug hthat isnt' very nice of me :P

Uh oh. Virgil still has no idea who his family are. I feel really sorry for Jeff, who appears to bearing the brunt of Vigil's rejection. I acn't wait to see how the family are going to work through all this. As far as Virgil is concerned Teresa is all he has.

Note: I'm really glad you decided to rewrite this story. You appear to be on a roll, and the plot construction is very good. from the looks of things you have thought through each chapter, and you have a clear idea where you want to take the reader.

Aw...I feel so bad for the Tracys...please find a way to let Virgil get his memory back (and please don't let it be Lucille coming to talk to him in his sleep. That's been way over used.). Please, please, please, please, please? I'm begging you here. This is so sad! *bursts into tears*

*starts frantically trying to think of ways for Virgil to remember* Maybe Teresa dies, and the shock causes him to remember? Or maybe he sees a piano, or paint brush, and remembers then? Or maybe the doctors give him a miracle cure? PLEASE! *puppy face*

Keep going. Don't you dare stop now.

OOh...one in a billion shot...good phrasing.

It's so sad though! Poor Jeff, poor Tracys!! Virgil doesn't remember!! Please let him remember sometime? He won't not know forever, right? *puppy face* Please let him remember sometime?

Anyways...*realizes that there is one more thing to weep about* NO! NOT MIGUEL! NO!

Well...that's it. Post soon!!

Blimey! How are the Tracys going to get out of this one? Great story-good, solid action/adveture. Well plotted too.