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| Venus Smurf 2004-04-08 ch 1,  | abuseWell, I admit that I'm slightly confused as to who the characters were, but I found this story to be wonderful anyway. There isn't anyone alive who can match you for the smoothness and eloquence of your writing style, and I loved every minute of this fic. |
| mahari 2004-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuse*sigh* Wonderful. And bless, Stepanshka.. that was so sweet. |
| Rheza 2003-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI wonder if you set out to make people feel so... well, emotional when you started this. I almost wanted to cry. The lullaby used was so... *right* for this. I had a great time reading this/them. :) |
| Rez1 2003-12-01 ch 1, | abuseDamn. I cry. Every damn time. So impressive, Ossian. I have to reread it every so often because it's such a writerly jewel. The even tone and deliberate cadence of Irina's memories increment the emotional weight little by little until you get to the astonishingly effective indirect dialogue, which lets Sark shine out in so clearly in the present time, and then the final lines, like a blow to the heart. Every damn time. Really fine. |
| Jorja 2003-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so sweet xoxoxoxox |
| mas 2003-09-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love that one of the first thing Stephen does when he wakes up is ask about Jack. |
| Cristabel 2003-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI've been following Thicker Than Water and I really like that you've shown us Irina's POV. It goes along so well with Thicker Than Water and stays true to Irina characterization as shown on the show. I really enjoyed this fic. |
| Igne Draconis 2003-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI check "Thicker than Water" at least once a day for updates. You have me so hooked. ;-) Today, since there was again no update, I decided to see what else you'd written and found this. Yay! Excellently done, like everything else. -Emma |
| Patsy 2003-08-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseIrina's view to the epic you have written. I love it! |
| tini243 2003-08-20 ch 1, | abuseSo beautiful and so sad. I totally love 'Thicker than water' and I liked this insight into Irinas feelings for her son. Especially loved the two handholding scene. You captured exactly how painful it must be for a mother to give away her 3 week old newborn. I almost cried. |
| Ori 2003-08-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseTerrific. THis is just what this universe needed. The universe you have created is among the best of ALias fanfiction. |
| kort 2003-08-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseCompletely and totally wonderful. A beautiful companion piece to Thicker Than Water. You capture Irina perfectly. Keep up the great work. |
| cjgurl42786 2003-08-17 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely beautiful. Going to cry... Now get back to work on Thicker Than Water! |
| Janice 2003-08-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseThanks for writing this. I was hoping you would share with us Irina looking out for her son. Beautifully written, as always. |
| Christina Simon 2003-08-16 ch 1, | abuseI really, really loved it. Seriously. I've also been following Thicker Than Water and was happy to find this to go along with it. |