I've always really liked this one. Just had to read it again. ;oD

I loved this! How've I not read it before...awesoem all around, and I loved the theme you had running through--VERY like an episode. Gotta love Jim (I really do like original characters in fic when they don't take over the story, and yours are some of the best.)

Cute!! I like the ending. And Grissom sounds right.

Not bad,not bad at all.I understood the explaining blood spatter to Greg that Grissom was relating to him.The information can be just as interesting and exciting if not more than the story intself.You have too write a sequel.Grissom never checked Greg's homework.
email: lbr30@juno.com
story title: Judge Not by Burked

Wow! I am in awe of you and your story-telling ability! Your story was very real when it came to the crime scenes! You are a very professional writer, and you wrote the characters very close to what they are on the show. You also showed a devotion to the show by some of the details that were in there! I loved your story!

Simply wonderful. Once again you deliver an imaginative, unique story and glimpse into our favorite characters and their supporting players. I am in awe of your talents. Thank you so much for sharing them with us! What a simply classic, heartfelt ending. Loved it.

Another job well done, Burked! I know what it feels like to be judged by who you sleep with, and you really brought that home in the story. Keep up the good work!!

I am reviewing this as I go because I don't want to forget something by the end.

-First of all, kudos for the crime and the way you dealt with it.
-Second of all, this is the first of yours that I've read (I think), and now I know what all the fuss Under the Bridge was about.
-You're right. French sounds much more expensive. Plus, the other is almost "Burnmaster", which is not good for a caterer.
-Hank. Hee.
-What is it indeed with southern CSIs. Your attention to continuity is fantastis. Good worm. Have a cookie.
-You know an awful lot. I bow to superior talent.

I kind of lost your cases in the middle, but that was mostly because I have a short attention span. I love the ending. You are now on m list.

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Wow! Burked, you still surprise me! Another excellently written, accurately portrayed glimpse into our favorite science nerds. Really nice original characters too!

The end was so good! Please continue soon!

wow, burked. you are so convincing in your writing. i can really see something like this showing up on the show, very much unlike the stuff i write. everytime i see your name on a story, i get excited. keep up your awsome writing! thanks!

You know, "Burked" really should be synonymous with "excellent writing" and "quality"! This is just another great story.

Ahh...excellent. Your mind is really something. I know I comment in almost every review how outstanding your writing skills are, but you're organizational skills are unbelievable as well. If you just sit down and pour out a story like this, you really need to pat yourself on the back. It's as if every section of the story fits perfectly and works to progress the plot along. I've read published novels that aren't as succinct. Also, the last lines were great, very Grissom--you have such a knack for closing a story. I'm jealous.

This is a great story. Your work is absolutely excellent. Thank you for sharing with us.