Aww, very sweet, very unique. I like this a lot.

Wow, I like your...purple voyeurism. I;ve read this story about 15 times, and each repeat, I am thrown into another world. A word hardly touched or tainted by LXG, but a world just the same. You should redraught the characters and put this on Fiction press.

Interesting.. More, perhaps?

*reads and chuckles to herself* okay that was...funny, I can actually picture hyde acting like that to a guy sugesting that and not in the least bit afraid. well written too.

Captivating. Such excellent imagery.