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| Astrobot7000 2004-05-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseWell that was really good, the formatting sucks, but Im sure thats just the dault of ffn.net My only complaint is the spirit thing that came out of the water gem was never fully explained. Other than that, this cvhapter was great! |
| Sleepy Sora 2003-09-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseAw, poor Katsumi. I'm interested in seeing how the relationship between her and Tiki-Boy will turn out. Keep the good times rollin' |
| Astrobot7000 2003-08-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow! This was really great! The pacing is alot better then in the first chapter, and the decriptions are a bit better. This one really is a great! You have improved alot. However, I dont like the death of the rabbit, being druidic. However, the story was still REALLY GREAT! |
| Astrobot7000 2003-08-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt seems to me that you paced this a bit to fast. I like it alot and all, but the action was just to busy and not enough description, ya see? Other then that, this is great! ^_^ *Gives you 5 bucks* Cant wait for the next chapter! |
| Sora who is too lazy to sig... 2003-08-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseMwaha! Glover! I used to have that game! *pokes Glover* Is Crosstitch or whatshisname gonna be in here? You've done a good job with the humor in this one, in my opinion. (I found the part where Bomberman asks Mihaele for help funny.) You've improved as a writer...I'm proud of you! Have a Lilith plushie! *tosses a Lilith plushie at your head* |