OMG!This fic was awesome, I loved it.You have a great writing style and it was a really entertaining fic.

Great job, Logica. Very good story. I hope you
write more stories.

Carol

Oh man. I almost cried when I read the last
paragraph. Good job.

Carol

excelent! I love HxE slash! This fic was real intresting and deep. You wrote it very well. Write another one and soon please.

I'm enjoying this story. I'm intrigued by the ongoing question of Donna's writer's block; it's a nice detail. I hope it's resolved as Donna figures stuff out. Oh, and I think it's perfectly reasonable for Donna to end up breaking up with Eric, if that is where you're taking this; you've set this after Donna's university graduatation, and not many high school relationships survive that long. People do grow and change, and I think you're doing a pretty good job of imagining how the 70's Show characters might change in four years.

Wow! Another great chapter. I'm dying to know who Donna will wind up with! I hope she stays with Eric because they are so perfect together!

A great story so far...I can only hope that it goes in the direction that it seems to be leading toward...will have to wait and see...excellent work...:D

Do your research. Hyde is loyal to Eric. The chemistry between Donna and Eric is lasting.
Enough said.

(Well written.)

Does Donna's true heart belong to Eric or Hyde? I can't wait to read Chapter 7.

Carol

good chapter. post the next one soon!

I loved the way you described the restaurant, there are a few in my town in just the way you described it.

Sounds like the characters are at a crossroads.

Great job.

Carol

good chapter!i cant wait to read more! update soon!

Just wanted to say that I am getting pretty hooked on this story, definately intrigued by it, and can't wait to see more :)

Excellent chapter. Can't wait for Chapter 5. I like how you write the Donna character.

Carol

Man, I applaud you for such a well written and in depth story! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Carol