oh my god.

I loved your story, Radar is one of my fav. characters and I'm a huge supporter of Hawkeye/Trapper. (I live for M*A*S*H reruns lol) But the end of your story was SO sad! I did not see that coming, I thought for sure she had been transported back to Tokyo, then the rest of the story was gunna be about Victoria trying to get back to MASH 4077th and Radar, Hawkeye, and Trapper trying to live without her.

Could you PLEASE make an alternate ending where she lives! I hate that Radar killed himself, I think you could make a really great rest of the story. I hate bothering people about changing their stories, I've only done it twice before, and only for really good ones. This story really made me fall in love with M*A*S*H all over again!

Sincerely and with Love

Gilwen

I know this story has been finished for a while, but I had to add in my bit.
The only real complaint I would make is with Victoria's character. While she could have easily been believable, I think the lack of details on her reactions and feelings made it, well, less believable. Its one of the drawbacks of writing original characters - and I've had that problem myself. There's just something too perfect about her, despite all the glares from the nurses, and I think it has to do with her 'perfect understanding' of Trapper and Hawkeye. (Just a little constuctive criticism, meant in the most positive way.)
This story was good read. I'm glad I read it. It was nice to see Radar get a little romance - and especially nice to see Hawk and Trapper brought together. And I believe some of your reviewers are just suckers for happy endings, but all does not end like that. I am perfectly pleased with the ending, because sometimes I like to write sad endings too. I support your choice of ending and don't find it a letdown at all!
Jenna

i'm not very fond of slash stories, but other than that the plot is good. i like the whole tory/radar thing. they make a cute couple, and i think radar should get e girlfriend. can we kind of see a little more between them, like more on their reltionship? maybe a little less slash or somwthing?

the ending was kind of a letdown, i mean, you just kids cut it off. and i really don't think radar would have done something like that, i mean, him being radar. so i thought that was a little out of character. other than that, nice job.

wow, whe you said the story was about bringing people together, i figured hawkeye and margaret, not hawkeye and trapper. i was a little surprised when i found that out- not in a bad way, just surprised. i'm interested to see what happns. overall, its a good story.

Very, very awesome. I don't think I will think of lilacs the same ever again.

OK, that was a crappy ending. If you were bored you could've taken off the story instead of just "ok, they all died happily ever after the end."

Whe! Cute chapter!

Aww, i love the way Victoria is so accepting of Hawkeye and Trapper. Great story, i can't wait to read more!

Not exactly fond of slash, could we get a little Tory/Radar here?

Great story! Can't wait to read more. :)

Nice. Now, if you'll only update the others...

This is a good story. I'm not overly fond of SLASH, but it's good nontheless. I liked how Frank joined in Hawkeye, Trapper, and Victoria's fight. I like Victoria and Radar together. It's nice to see him have a romantic involvement for a change. As you said, the nurses dismiss him as just a kid. As for the pairing of Hawkeye and Trapper, as I said before, I'm not overly fond of SLASH. In my opinion, they're just best friends, nothing more. But, this is a good story and I'd like to read more of it, so update soon!

Even though I think the whole senario of keeping a teenager there is unrealistic, I like the story. I think Torey's little thoughts or Hawkeye and Trapper's relationship are cute. Not too sure if I like the Torey/Radar thing, though. She's a bit too young.

Either way, I'd like to read more. :)