You. Are. An. Amazing. Writer. Hey? This is an amazing story, you know that? I read the entire thing in five hours. _With chocolate and milkshakes to keep me going). XP
Once I finish this review I will allow my eyeballs to melt out of my head.
So, I'll start with the beginning. None of your characters are out of personality, which is amazing because you've been writing this for so long! You OC's are awesome, and so unique! There's plenty of every character, and there's no fogotten aspects like Yuki/Kyo hate. The plot is amazing, and it doesn't involve an overused love decagon like many other stories have.
Basically, what I'm saying, is that this story is so amazing it has motivated me to write a review. Please update soon and keep writing!
Love,
~ come-by-chance

I figure leaving my mark on this story's fourth birthday is appropriate on some level.

I've been following Evermore since the beginning (years before I broke down and got a screenname on and it's been an interesting read. But it's been close to two and a half years since it's been touched.

The purpose of a review is (in theory) to comment on a chapter. I feel it would be unfair to comment in depth on what you yourself have deemed "not edited and not complete." That said, I like what I've been reading thus far.

Please don't let this story die.

Best of luck.

hi cool story!

Aw... No more to this chapter?

I had a dream that this story was finished... very strange. But man, was it a good dream. ^_^

Anyways, awesome story. One of the few good FB fics out there. I do hope it comes off suspension soon.

This is so good! please update soon, 'kay!

SERINITY'S ANGEL ^_~

This story is great! I hope you get time to update this soon, I can hardly wait to read what happens next.

Everyone seems to be IC and I love your OC, he seems very real and human. I think I'll go read your side story now, I'm wondering where that guy came from.

wah why arent you contiuing it??

AH KEEP WRITING TEH STORY I ISH ADDICTED ON IT!

In all of Furuba ficdom, I have one fic that I'm following religiously.

ONE.

So why oh WHY has it been a year since it was updated?!

I love ur story so far but it'd be cool if u'd update it soon cuz i wanna know what i'll happen next. so please update soon.

Realizing the current hiatus (?) you have on this fic, I have to say that (after having spent my entire weekend and much of last Monday's evening glued to a word-processing document with all the chapters copied into it) that you really have created something wonderful here. It has a great range of views, and some of the best writting I've seen. There aren't very many well-written Furuba fics out there, and this one was an absolute pleasure to read. (^^ My sister got all annoyed at me when I started printing pages out when I had to get off the computer. *laugh*) I hope that maybe you will feel like updating soon--I know it's not a pleasure to write when you aren't inspired to, but please don't abandon this fic. (Honestly, you have it at a point where you can just finish writing it without much worry about the manga developments... Except maybe CH. 97... *sweatdrop*)

Anyway, thank you for giving us what you have till now. It was GREAT!

*poke* *poke* It's been almost a YEAR, UPDATE!! Updateupdateupdateupdate! *deep breath* UPDATE! *poke* I'm going to make sure I bother you more often. I hadn't realized it's been almost twelve months since you last updated this story. Haven't you gotten anywhere yet? T.T We miss you, come back! Pretty please with a whipped-cream-covered bishie on top?

0 me gee!!. first time reading such a great fanfic...
i luv it!!
pleasepleaseplease continue it!!

I have read your story "Evermore", and have discovered that it has not been updated for, er, *quite* some time. I think you meant to put the enxt one up soon, but never did.
I just wanted to ask you if you could continue the story, because, well, it's good. Really good. From almost all of the Fruits Basket fanfictions I have ever come across, I think this is among the ones I found most enjoyable. So I wanted to beg you to continue it, because insignificant people like me, who stand in the shadows waiting for talented writers like yourself to update, still read these stories which are slightly out of date.
I don't want to press you, but I would really like it if you finished the story, because not only am I interested in meeting the "Esper", I would also like to see if you end the fic with a Kyo&Tohru pairing or a Tohru&Yuki pairing. I would also like to see how Akito reacts when it all ends. So, please, continue the story.
If you decide that you will continue (which I sincerely hope you will) then I would just like to say with the utmost politeness and respect meant that it seems as if Arisa and Saki play a larger role than Tohru in your story. Tohru is one of the main characters in the original plot, and though it was like that at the beginning of your fic, towards the end and middle, Tohru started to fade out of the picture as the story centred on Akito, Kyo, Yuki, Belduine and the "Esper". I like the way you build things up, but I would just like to see Tohru play a slightly bigger part, because (no offense meant here) she seems a little *too* weak, and a little *too* helpless.
I mean no ill things, and I hope you won't take offense. Being the easily-frightened and intimidated person that I am, I cannot even put my e-mail address here, but only leave an anonymous comment asking you to write further. I hope you will.

Your ever devoted fan,
Chibi Ame