 Much_Ignorance 2006-07-10 . chapter 1 Wow. I'm a tidusXyuna kind of person, but I have to say, this was a pretty good read! Nearly converted me into a tikku person ;) |
 MsAlannaRae 2006-04-02 . chapter 1My God! Tikku! Awesomely written Tikku.
That has to be one of my favourite pairings out of all of the FF games.
And, you wrote Rikku so well! Some people just completely butcher her character, and it makes me so mad, because she's awesome. You have a great talent for expressing emotions.
Alanna |
 Tidiku 2005-01-24 . chapter 1I think this is one of the best tikku writings out there...keep writing |
 bwilbur 2004-03-12 . chapter 1AW~~!@ That's so cute. You protrayed Rikku really well - I give you mad props on that. |
 JVTruman 2003-10-26 . chapter 1 Yes, names stay the same in Al Bhed. Not just names of people, either. (Al Bhed is 'Al Bhed' in Al Bhed. Heh. A treasure chest in Home asks that one.) |
 NoelleFord1 2003-09-02 . chapter 1Hey I liked the story!! I mean, I'm a real Rikku fan, everyone tells me I'm so much like her!! OK, but one thing..people out there, who read the very beginning, where it was notes to the flamers, well..umm, you should keep THOSE feelings to yourself, and chill-out dude, what are ya yelling for? (That was stupid!) Well, anyway I loved the story, but the beginning was un-called for, And umm, while I'm at, can anyone tell me how to deal with the sentencing?? Maybe, you could review one of my stories...and tell me what's the matter with the sentencing...Anyway, good story! Love it!
-The Real Rikku- |
 Rikkoshaye 2003-08-18 . chapter 1Very cute one-sider. I liked it. |
 Quistis Chick 2003-08-18 . chapter 1Nice job. You got Rikku's attitude down just right. |
 The Jack of Spades 2003-08-18 . chapter 1Thank goodness, another Tidus/Rikku fic appears, and very well-written too (and if I see another one of those detestible Auron/Rikku stories up here, I'm going to be tempted to throttle one of those kiddie writers). You described Rikku's feelings very eloquently, and you captured her kind of speaking very well. I always thought the Tidus/Yuna pairing was forced. Rikku would've made a more logical match for him (couldn't Square have made a love triangle? That would've been nice.)
One thing: about the extremely long flame rant in here - you didn't need to do that. No one's going to flame you for writing about what you like, and if they do, they don't need to be addressed. They're not important enough to get upset about. People who take the time to tell you off for what you think have no lives, and are probably envious of your talent. Besides, they make idiots out of themselves just by ** and moaning, rather than writing a decent critique. And when you have really long notes before a story, people tend to skip over them (I've found this out myself). So, in the future, don't waste time doing that. If someone's going to flame you, they'll do it regardless of any notes. (and in that event, since they're usually anonymous, you can always delete them ;)
Well, nice work, and good luck with future projects. |
 Greg's Lab Assistant 2003-08-18 . chapter 1Aw I liked it! I think I'm like Rikku too cause I'm bubbly and... well just like rikku. I hope you don't make this a one shot and add more chapters, but is you don't that's fine. and yes the names stay the same i'm pretty sure. |
 spirited 2003-08-18 . chapter 1 How could you possibly be flamed for that fic? It was so cute, and a bit sad of course. I'm a sucker for the Al Behd language, and I love how you used it in the fic! Gah, Tikku would've been so cute! |
 Wolfy 2003-08-17 . chapter 1Aww!! Poor Rikku!! This was so good, but so sad! I always thought Rikku and Tidus should've gotten together. They just fit more, you know? Well anyway, I really liked this. Great job! Oh, and I liked your message to the flamers out there. I feel the same way! |
 Burning Ice 2003-08-17 . chapter 1Aw! So sad! But its really good! And really in Charicter! I don't see why somone would flame this story, Though I have seen somone go as far as posting a story consisting of two lines badmouthing another writer, (hopes that freak was blocked) ::sigh:: anyways, gunna go cry now!
-Icy |
 cookie crumbs 2003-08-17 . chapter 1that was WKD! poor Rikku :( So you gonna wirte anymore? I think ya should your googd at it! ^_^
cya
*~angels kissx~* |
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