Of course, your story...as short as it is...is still the cream of the crop. You just can't help but laugh when reading your stories. I swear they are good for the heart!
BD...changed to-RueBroadway

Xena finally laughs! Yes. All that hot-and-sweaty-Ares must have distracted her! ;)

LOL! "Your attempt at spiritual enlightenment or TV reception?" -- and a classic it is. (Hey, you realise all your scene breaks got lost in this site's formatting? :-/)

I can just see Gab sitting there with the evil cat. Hehe. Please continue ASAP!

Great story! I especially love the way you've described Gabrielle's pets - priceless! Can't wait for more. :)

please update soon i like it

Hey this is awesome! Please update soon, you're doing a great job!

Mistress Martin

Great story Tali, hope your Muse descides to cooperate:):)

Tali you gotta keep writting this one It's really fun to read and I can't wait for more

Still smoothly written and witty as ever. I'm looking forward to the next installment!

cool story, hope you write more.

Well! It's about time you added something to this buding story!! It's god but I need more!! Keep em comin, keep em comin!
:)
-BD

Yay for updated stories! Love this one, it's such a crack-up . . . Alti the cat, and that line about the letter "a" - I've always thought that too!! Keep going kiddo, ok?

you better finish this story...
I mean it ...
I need you to finish this story...
It's one of the best ubers I've read...
I give it ... * (stars)
;)

Your story's pretty funny. I love the bit with Gab's pets :)

Wonderful, Tali! *wild applause* Please continue!