Reviews for The Sixth Club

Six-string Samurai 2007-11-14 ch 1,	abusehaha. somehow this is the best of the short fics you've written so far.
Rose1948 2007-08-07 ch 1,	abuseAwesome twist! snickers
oh.no.the.axe.tofu 2004-12-05 ch 1,	abuseDecent story, a bit rushed though. I doubt that Nabiki would give someone that kind of warning before setting the dogs on them.
Ghost 2003-08-18 ch 1,	abuseNeatly done, and with an interesting theme. Good twist at the end. I found myself really disliking Kiyomi, and now I realise why. (Never were a big fan of Nabiki. ^^) There’s room for improvement, though. For starters, you rely very heavily on dialogue to get the story moving. Work more on actually describing the scenes and what the characters are doing in greater detail. The ending left many questions unanswered. Why would Nabiki try to blackmail herself? Why would someone in America plant multiple spy-cams all over Nerima, of all places? How did he do it, anyway? And why this fascination for Nabiki? Still, it’s an original plot and not badly written at that. Thumb’s up for you! ^_~
burgerbecky 2003-08-17 ch 1,	abuseNice little yarn you threw together. I liked it.