LOL MAKE MORE PLEASE!

Lol nice. Parappa ftw!

More please? *puppy eyes, lip trembling*

Ok... This chapter wasn't as good as the first the only part in my opini(Piano Begins.)

Ash: When-

B-Bop: Darth-

Mario: Vader-

Ash: Attacked-

B-Bop: My-

Mario: Pet-

Ash: Poodle-

B-Bop: I-

Mario: Couldn't-

Ash: Help-

B-Bop: But-

Mario: Be-

Ash: Sad.

B-Bop: I-

Mario: Swore-

Ash: That-

B-Bop: Someday-

Mario: I-

Ash: Would-

B-Bop: Get-

Mario: My-

Ash: Revenge-

B-Bop: On-

Mario: Darth-

Ash: Vader.

B-Bop: But-

Mario: Once-

Ash: I-

B-Bop: Saw-

Mario: Darth-

Ash: Vader-

B-Bop: I-

Mario: Ran-

Ash: Away.

B-Bop: I-

Mario: Ran-

Ash: Very-

B-Bop: Very-

Mario: Very-

Ash: Very-

B-Bop: Very-

Mario: Very-

Ash: Very-

B-Bop: Far-

Mario: (big finish) Away!

That was the only thing funny. But I can't wait for some more. Please make some more Chapters.

*Yoshi-Karia*

HAHAHAH I am Lughing my head off like crazy. I wait to read this next chapter.

*Yoshi-Karia*

Great story! will you post another chapter?

(I have a game show story like it, it's called who's the idiot.)

Hahahahah! That was SO funny! I really liked Jack. Please do a few more! Please?

I love it add more kim possible.

I wouldn't have read this if it didn't have Krystal in it, but funny otherwise.

(disapointed) Oh...I WANTED PROPS!

me again

that was pretty funny! good job, yet again!

SPARKLIE! VERY GOOD! *peace sign at B-Bop* heh heh _ anyways! good work! and yeah, i'm working on my fictions, that too and i need you to e-mail me ok? i have a bit of news to tell you and it's kinda urgent ok? other than that, KEEP IT UP!

Oh, that was too funny!

HEY! Zidane from Final Fantasy IX! Hehehehehe!

oh my giddy-gods, that was amazing! im a huge fan of the show and i loved this story! i didn't know most of the charactors but i knew enough to get the image! please keep doing more!