Wow. This is beautiful. And how I believe Jack thinks of his freedon. You captured him.

This is... wow. I have no words to describe it.
Innovative, it was. I can believe the story about the compass propelled by wind. It seems so... Jack Sparrow to me. Terribly in-character. The way he speaks of his freadom, ship, and wind... just magnificent!
And that is even before I get to the part of the four personalities of the "brothers and sisters" ^^;; Or the part when he speaks about the anchors...
I am beginning to envy you. I wish I could grasp the characters like this... or to write like this.. (although I write in spanish, so that's totally different in a way). Your ideas are original and very fresh.
I certainly hope you write more, because I'll be reading!

I like. A nice break from all of those fics where people write Jack as what he seems from the outside, (one of those fics being mine as I must ashamedly admit) but you-you write him as he is from the inside. You shouldn't continue it. I like how you leave it there. The North wind is my way...
-BPDD =D

Cool, very poetic. I have no idea if more than half of those names for the North Wind are true, but it seems right that Jack would know them all. You got into Jack's mind rather well, I believe he thinks like that. Interesting take on the North Wind! :)

very very VERY good story. your way of describing what the wind means through jack is very detailed and well thought-out. this also shows another layer to jack's mind- how he acts (or reacts) and how much trust he has in what he does. keep up the excellent writing, i'll definitely be looking out for more of your work :D

that was one of the best things I've ever read!! Wow, it seems like it could really be part of his character. Well written and researched too. Keep up the good work!

oh cora!

you've got the captain's character spot-on, a and that in itself is a feat. you're fantastic at capturing characters; you find the most critical elements of their personalities and expand, making the reader feel as if you are truly speaking the character's voice. the idea fits jack excellently and you have his speech to a tee. you are spectacular, my doll and thank you for dedicating this slice of heaven to me.