Well, it was silly and cute and fun, and well, I loved it! Nice clear writing made it such an enjoyable read. Why can't they allow a little zaniness on the show? They so need it. ;)

ok, i liked it, but i am so damn confused.

Is it just me that can't see chapter 1? It only has like 3 1/2 sentences and I really wanna read it, I might aswell read the other chapters first!

Cool! I like the idea of Grissom with blue hair! Great story. I loved it.