::cries:: Beautiful. Perfect. Please don't retire again. Please?

*bloinks* WOOOOW. I mean, ah -- um, just... wow. And you said this would stink?! *whaps you over the head repeatedly with a gigantic rubber fish until you admit that you are THE best Ani-author there is* Anyway, this was just INCREDIBLE. I don't know what Angel's talking about, the thought-speak shows up just fiiiiiine on my screen, and I just LOVE this. The entire concept. I can see why Noelle's death was necessary to the plot, but DID YOU HAVE TO KILL HER?!?!? And how'd she become a Controller? That part wasn't clear. Something tells me that the Yeerk in her head would have had some trouble controlling her, being as she loved(?) him so much. (See Animorphs #2 - humans can be quite a pain when they want to.) Also, it seemed kind of ironic, that a girl that works solely for God would be murdered - accidentally or not - by another one of God's workers. Because if you think about it, the Anis are fighting for good, and so is God. So that part didn't click. Of course, you should have killed RACHEL instead... or made a Rachel/Marco and Tobias/Noelle thing... or not. I love this the way it is. 1000000/10 And girl, you'd BETTER come out of retirement!

I have mixed feelings about this. For one, I am a aethist. Two, no matter how good this was written (very good, I must say) I don't like it. Noelle. What did she show him? I am afraid I'm simply too cynical to enjoy this. Very well writtne, though.

Hmm... pretty confusing, what with there being no thought-speak to read (and you might wanna make some changes to just that), but otherwise, it was good to read)

Not exactly cheer, but definitely a work of art. You got your point across nicely, without over exaggeration and a real quality that you usually don't find. I'd be biased to say Rachel and Tobias don't belong together, because that's just an opinion, but I really think you did a great job with Noelle and Tobias and her had so much potential. I understand her death I guess, but I couldn't help but be a little disappointed. Oh well. Keep writing.

It's wonderful!!!!! You got it out, and it's WONDERFUL!!! I love it, there's depression in there but you know, there's also hope, yanno? *bursts into tears* That was SO touching and moving and really well written...

*dances* Yeah Amerz! This rocked..all the effort you put into it really shows times ten..Okay, so that didn't make sense. It was all bitersweet and holidayish..well okay, scratch the last one. Parts of it were depressing as heylos, but it had a hopeful tone to it throughout the whole thing and *sniff* I *sniff* thought it was wonderful. *sniff*

Exxxxxxelent...... disturbing what the minds of teenagers can think up.... i loooove it... keep up the good work yooou... ~maniacal laughter for a few hours~ exxxxxelent......