Holy moly!

Found you on livejournal and thought your pen name looked interesting, so I checked it out, and lo and behold, it's not 'slash'! I have some ideas about slash, and believe that the term degrades male homosexuality (it's not my fault. I'm just a little obsessed with Oscar Wilde). The story is positively delicious, delightful. You're wonderfully talented, Vivica...

Wow Becca,

That was so well written. I liked the mention of scarlet and green ;). Anyway, keep up the extremely well written erotica, Mr.Floen would be proud.

You dirty girl. I love it. SO HOT! If I was a guy...like super boner. Good to know, isn't it? You're such a talented writer and I'm not just saying that cause it's arousing and beautiful. Everything's so anonymous and sexy. M! Anyway, see you in school my filthy minded sex pot.

Holy hell, that is the post poetic sex scene I've ever read. I don't know how to explain how much I love it. The metaphors and just plain poeticness of it! (is poeticness even a word?) All the same, I loved it and I can't wait to read your other stories!
Brilliant!
Snapescookiejar

That was so sad! I love it! *sobs* now I feel all sad. I really liked it. Just s you know you are on my fav authors list :)Please write some more in the same vein!
P.S. The next chapter of resurrection has been updated finally.

Wow. That was intense. Very well-written. Yeah, I’m one of those reviewers who actually give constructive criticism...I guess. I really liked this fic. I’m going to add it to my fave stories list! Good job!

wow, that was amazing writing! i love its artistic and poetic nature, you use it really well. also i like how the actual sex is more like a poem - good on you for not writing a fully explicit sex scene! leaves a bit of mystery (not to mention taste :P) lol. you also convey that sense of urgent heartbreak - congrats, this is really well written

YAY! Hey, "shaglet" is copyright by Heaven...LOL. Yay! You're younger than I am, and you've already dared to write a shaglet. I'm actually trying to write one... Not doing very well, though, lol. I LOVE t.A.T.u., but I don't particularly care for 30 Minutes... Clowns rocks, though. ^_^

Wow. I must say, that wasn't at all what I expected when you said "shaglet". This is one of the most poetic, indirect sex scenes I've ever read, and I love it!

Just a few suggestions... (1) Try to cut down on so many metaphors. They make the story really really pretty and poetic, but too many can be confusing. I use conceits a lot--that's an extended metaphor, a metaphor that runs through the whole thing, not just one place. Of course the most common conceit for Draco is a dragon.

(2) Not really a suggestion, just a comment. I love the way you made this story border on stream-of-consciousness. It's gives the story personality, and in my opinion, it's one of the best ways to tell slash stories, or at least the shagging scenes. I mean, hell, even if it's narrated, do you use complete sentences when you're having sex? (I'd hate to marry an English teacher.)

Excellent ficlet! Write more! I need slash... *Drooling* And BTW, I LOVED your review for "My Last Breath". The next one, "My Immortal", is in progress. I have three more sections to go. It's really long (about 4 or 50 words), so it's taking a while. I'd write more now, but it's 1 AM, lol. Talk to ya later!

that was great...i loved it..OMG...that kicked straight up **!

I love how you put that unfaithfully bad ending in it but yet still make it a beautiful story none the less...

It is really hard to do that and i think that anyone who can is a very good writer...


I really do ( for some weird reson) like these fics and the happy ending ones...

This broke my damn heart...I nearly cried...really!

Keep up the good work...E-mail me PLZ if you write any more HP stories...Is there more to this one?( i doubt it)

Well gotta go...hope you get this...

Love, Ray

That was so sweet and poetic! And very sad, too. I really liked it!