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You've been written up.

hmm...why does inuyasha call inuyasha shikon it kinda of weird ! well i think the story is great i havent read the rest of the stories but i think it will be great too hope u can write more story like that !

inu crying, lol, the character traits are WAY off. But its still a good fic.

it's a good story, but the relationship between inu and kag are kind of rushed. i read your note at the top and i dont how they would confuse you as a girl writer. I'm not trying to be mean, but it was kinda obvious to me you were a guy when you started writing the girl part. its a good story and i enjoyed it!

:)This is a REAL good story! PLEASE update soon and you have good fashion for your characters.:)

UPDATE SOON!:)

Woah... I can't wait for a lemon! Write next chappie soon!

OMG! Why haven't you updated in soo long! your fic is really good! I like it, its really interesting! OMG! Well keep up the good work!

you've had 0ver 1 week and 8 months to write the next chapter wats taking so long

or at least send me wat u got so far

one maore thing i will never for give u for making my Kagome get raped by hobo

asome

souta is the ass i thought hed be in middle school

2 things i cant belive 1 shippo head of a gang

2 keade the hag a techer

your story is well writen and is nice to read. i hope u write more soon!

lol...that was a cute chappie! i cant wait to read more! update update update!

luv it and keep going w/ the story ...

leslie thinks its ya byes

leslie

PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIB:E You left us hanging!

look if dont continue yhis story ill do over there and make you write. Sorry story ranatic side took over plz continue the story plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz Thanks mucho

Hey! _ It's been awhile! I haven't read this fic since...what? Haha. Last year. Well, great chapter. Wow, lots of fluff. The Shippo scene was hilarious. UPDATE SOON!