Hey i like the story. i was just wondering about the underage magic and in front of muggles thing that Jenny did in chapter 4. how come she didnt get a letter from the MoM?

Great job so far but please post more soon it has me waiting on pins and needles for more. I love your work so far keep up the great work please post soon

oh my god i wonder who that is

I love the story. Are you still writing it?

Oh. My. GOSH. :D That was flipping AWESOME! -gives cake and ice cream- My COMPLIMENTS! :D

TheRedBandit

I really like your story so far. There are a few mistakes (words that got pushed together, forgotten punctuation, etc.) but not enough to really matter that much. Keep it up!

TheRedBandit

hey, i have a question. you know how harry had a watch, and it worked? how is that possible? muggle stuffs not suposed to work in hogwarts...

Oh. My. GAD! YOU'RE ON FANFICTION!

O_O

And you read Inuyasha and Harry Potter and Artemis Fowl and write wonderful original stories and know Yuu Yuu Hakusho and

You're my hero.

... sorry, now you must think I'm a stalker. Nah, it's just Winged Shadow from Fictionpress ... who has now gone crazy.

:)

hurry up and post new chapter please!

im dying to find out whats going to happen next!

Just to help: "He reigned in his pacing" -should be "reined in" - people make that mistake all the time.

Hm...Salina should get out of that house, stat...nothing good is going to happen to her there. Just sayin... ; meanwhile, poor John-that can't end well, I'm surprised the parents allowed him to go to Hogwarts...

Rita S. is learning caution, that's somewhat funny... meanwhile, poor Harry-not getting on well with Jen...

I like how you go into the home lives of your different characters. I can't wait to read your next chapter!

I am a Harry Potter fanfiction addict. I just discovered this story, since I usually search for stories with a bit of word count.

I am usually not one to comment on plot, giving that totally to the author. I make a bit of an exception, for this story. This one has some enjoyable twists. Notably, this chapter with Jon, and his deeply religious family. It doesn't take much of a stretch to substitute the word magic for miracle. Intent ... love ... is the amazing driving force throughout scripture, and Dumbledore's recurrant theme.

The children are a wonderful rainbow collection of the best attributes of the 4 founders. Draco's kids have some issues to explore. The Potter family have some issues to explore. There is the unbridled, self-serving evil of Tom Riddle.

This one is going to be entertaining to watch develop.

I love this story. I just read it and I can't wait for the next update. I am adding this to my favorites list. Love your writing.

Wow, i just finished reading and this fan fic is so good, even after reading HPB and all that i am still enjoying it for what it is. You have done a great job making this Jenny's story not a copy of Harry's and i love all the other characters! Keep up the good work!

I like the story. Could you update soon like within the next week for continuity otherwise you will have missed the holiday.