This was very good. But you should make it longer! All you made happen was Amy , Camilla, Rowena, and Bekka will travel the world together. Where do they go? What happens? Do they meet up with Nancy and Mary again? I'd like some answers!

Great start. I really like the begining so far. Just out of curiocity did camilla call amy, amy when being introduced. Cant wait to read the next chapter. CIAO

Wow. What a great story! Still, if Camilla didn't raise her, in time, Amy will miss her. This is a great beginning, and I really hope to see more!