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| qblisa 2006-08-04 ch 16, | abuseWhat an excellent story. My favourite was thing was the device that allowed Sydeny and Sark to read eachothers minds, and how he kept singing to hide secrets. I LOVED IT! Just for the record, I hated Tarra. When Sark fell off the cliff, I couldn't believe it. I mean, he died doing the right thing, but it just wasn't his time. When he returned in the epilogue, I was so so so happy. It gave me hope that their adventures against/with eachother wouldn't end. Is there a chance of a sequal? I hope so. There is plenty of potential, and now Tarra is gone, it could be really good. Thank you so much. I LOVED your story. Lisa :) |
| xofalling2deep 2006-06-04 ch 16, | abuseCute ending. Even though they didn't get back together, there's this connection between them now. I really like this, great job. |
| Dalla7 2005-05-13 ch 16, | abuseGreat story, amazing! I absolutely loved it, too bad it had to end so quickly... I would have loved to read more! |
| Amalia Kensington 2004-05-08 ch 16, | abuseWHOO!! the chase is on!! what a lovely way to end things. ^_^ cos there's a plug for a sequel! so many unanswered questions! what happened to Tarra? who *is* Vaughn married to? will you really get wrinkles if you frown? haha! great job. cheers. --A |
| sallene 2004-04-09 ch 16, | abuseGood, he is alive! And the chase begins again. How typical. LOL Any chance of a sequel? |
| leonsalanna 2004-04-06 ch 16, | abuseAw...My gawd, this is the 6th story I'm reading on here that's ended this week. Very strange |
| Andy Rooney SUCKS 2004-04-05 ch 16, anon. | abuseAwesome! Loved the ending! |
| Wendy 2004-04-05 ch 16, anon. | abuseI like it very much. It is great story..Hope i can read more of your fan fiction soon. You have a good day |
| Wendy 2004-04-05 ch 16, anon. | abuseI like it very much. It is great story..Hope i can read more of your fan fiction soon. You have a good day |
| Fatema 2004-02-09 ch 15, | abusePlease tell me you didn't JUST kill Sark! I mean Moore can go. I've been tired of her ever since she kidnapped Sark and all. But dang! You can't kill him! Update soon :) |
| leonsalanna 2004-01-25 ch 15, | abuseNO! *sniff* *sniff* dont die sark! and now syd will do sumthing stupid cuz she wont know hes alive cuz he doesnt have the disc on... |
| AubreyAnn 2004-01-25 ch 15, | abuseYou're doing an amazing job! I really hope you're planning on continuing this story. If you're not, well, I think I might just cry ^_^ |
| Fanatic482 2004-01-23 ch 15, | abuse//She took one last look into those brilliant blue eyes, eyes she could have sworn were misting with tears, before he reached in and kissed her passionately, deeply, almost desperately. Sydney felt every aspect of her being, and every aspect of his, melding, entwining, percolating into each other until they were one entity, one being standing atop the edge of the earth at the edge of time.// That was just INSANELY beautiful... but then again, you probably knew that :) And for interrupting that scene, Tarra Moore deserves death in the worst way... |
| sallene 2004-01-23 ch 15, | abuseBut is it really the end? I can't help but hope you'll take pity on us and give us more. Even if it's just Syd weeping over Sark's body..although I hope that's not it. Anyway, I love this story,and I'm so glad that you updated. I've been following it for some time and I think you've done a wonderful job. |
| Fanatic482 2004-01-06 ch 14, | abuseI love the thought of Syd and Sark working as a team... this story is just so fabulous! I hate that it has to end... //Sark sighed. "And you can't confuse Vaughn with a book... for one thing, a book has a spine..."// *falls over laughing* I can't tell you how many times I've thought that too... *shameless grin* Okay, so what's up with all of this Vaughn spouting about Tarra being good? |