   valkan 2004-08-04 . chapter 1Read all four chapters you have up. Very good beginning to a sequel from an excellent story. Please continue this story, its very entertaining, and I love your writing style, and interpretations of the characters Ico and Yorda. |
| Faceplant02 2004-07-28 . chapter 4 bad, bad, bad, bad, bad Siania. It's not fair!! But ohh I can see it now: once Siania and Narra reach the shore, Siania gags Narra and stuffs her in the boat meanwhile dropping Narra's sack on the shore and accidentally "letting the cat out of the bag" (sorry I couldn't resist) to go arouse suspicion in Vari whom Riara runs into on the way home. Okay probably not, but until you update your story to your own liking bear with my delusions of grandeur, k? bye for now. |
| Technocrack 2003-11-21 . chapter 1 Yeah, i know i should technically post this review on the ORIGINAL story... But i've always hated technicalities. :P
I just finished reading Yorda's Battles, and, let me say... Damn...
I haven't ever played the game, but i've heard good things about it, and, after losing an opportunity to buy it for $5, i found it at the Electronics Boutique store and managed to convince my mom to buy it.
But, meh, anyway, back to the story review...
You have talent. You have alot of talent. You have talent that grabs MY talent by the throat and backhands it into a wall.
Keep this sequel going- so far, from the little bit i've read, it's the same quality, if not better, than Yorda's Battles.
But, it's almost 1:30 AM, i'm tired, and i'm pretty sure my rambling's starting to bug you, but let me say one more thing:
You've pretty much inspired me to finish my original story. I was going to stop it, due to lack of reviews, but i think i'll actually upload the third chapter now... |
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