Again, fantastic, truly fantastic. I love Spike, how he is so Pre-Buffy relationship, so evil but yet so similar to how he is after he goes good. He was the star of this show, and you captured his character perfectly.

I like how Doyle got to be a Hero. He doesn't, often enough. I love his relationship talk with spike. Hilarious. I also like how he and Dru don't work out, it just kind of proves the whole 'no soul, no love' deal.

Again, a wonderful piece.

10/10

wow I liked that. Wesley is a good character like him when he goes into brooding mode on Angel after giving up Connor.

no offense but Irish people don't say bloody as a cus word. Doyle uses ( Damn) alot though.

Just a little critique but it is really good

love it