Please update this soon!

I relly liked this chapter, and have no objectiones whatsoever to the direction it's taking!^^ (Perhaps I'm a little perverted:P) It showed the troubles Aya has very well. I'm looking forward to see what happens next!

Heh, I just had to read on after chap 21... Man, what angst do those two conjure up together. I love how your wite the both of them though. You really manage to get the characters to be very different, and still a bit the same. (now that sounds strange, even to me...) I really loved the bit of insight from Yoji in chap. 21. Especially him thinking about why he actually likes Aya. --I thought that this recent development of interest in Aya was a sign I was moving on a little. It would be about freaking time, wouldn’t it? But I’m getting worried that maybe the truth is that I’m attracted to him because he wouldn’t expect me to. Aya understands not moving on.-- I guess that being atracted to someone that resembles you is kinda logical. Someone that understands you is even better. I feel a bit sorry for him though. Thinking that he would be so very bad for Aya, bringing himself down even more. Hehe, you really do like letting characters dance around each other, neh?
I also really liked the ´like taking naps´ theory. Hehe, when I was feeling down I used to nap a lot for the same reason (although Yoiji would have a lot more reason to I guess...) Ow and Aya going to look for Yoji, that was so sweet! And nicking the cranes... *grins*

Then this chapter... I think you wrote the lemony bit very wel. And the thinking that came with it seems so very realistic too. All the insights from Aya are so very... in denial. *grins* Makes it fun to read though. Him making the connections and concluding things just so he can deny everything in the next second and fabricate reasons why it´s NOT like that. *applouds* I loved this little thought; --Hn, Kudoh. More like Kudzu. Relentlessly working his way into all the cracks in my foundation. Until it breaks. Creeping over everything.-- Hehe, that´s a vry cool comparison.
The interesting thing of these two chapters (in my opinion) is that they think very alike, actually. Like the bit of insight Yoji has. And then Aya; --Which is worse? Relinquishing to an expectation? Or wanting him?-- Heh, I wonder if they'l ever figure it out. *smirks* Don't torture them to much, will you?

Thank you so much for the wonderfull updates! You made my day. ^_^ They were a very nice reward after my tests. I'll be waiting for more, as ever!

X Wolfje

Cute! Heh, I don´t really know what else to say. I hoped that they would -finally- figure things out in this chapter, so thank you! *grins* And if it ook some time to get it right, so be it. I loved how it all came together in the end (well, not end, I guess...) I do wonder what you are planning to do with them now. Are they staying were they are or are they going to look for the other two? I´m just so happy that you updated this story again! *sends waves of enthusiasm through the computer*
I liked this chapter, definitly. ^_^ Omi´s sarcasm is great! --Ah, Ken. Poetically blunt, as usual.-- Hee hee, the both of them are so cute, turning ´round each other like that. Omi really had to corner Ken to get an answer, neh. And Ken´s reaction to Omi kissing him... (--But Ken doesn’t really look like someone who just received a heinously atrocious kiss. He looks more like someone who just went into epileptic shock.--) *laughs and applouds* Again, finally! (sorry, no patience...)

Well, thank you for the wonderfull chapter! I loved it and I´m going to read the next one now...

X Wolfje

*first squees at the update that has made an absolute ** of a day much nicer*

So, I can definitely see why the, ahem, rating went up...but I do also love Aya's thought process in this. However, I am incredibly worried as to what Yohji will do when he comes back, even if Aya is leaving a note. Yohji's not exactly mentally stable either, and he might draw some odd (read: bad) conclusions.

Eagerly awaiting next chapter (or an update on Hello, Goodbye...either would be loverly...)

incredibly good. keep on, have some cookies. ^^

I love this story. Sincerely, each and every chapter has me hooked and begging for more. There is just so much UST that I can barely stand it and my more sadistic nature cackles with glee at the anticipation it leaves everyone in. Honestly, you have become one of my all time favorite writers and I'm hanging off your every...word? Possibly word. More probably chapter, but you get the point.

I could not possible be more excited that you've most passed your writers block to become a much more active author. Read: WAY more active than me (thank gods for that).

Anyway.. I'm just extending my gratitude for your outstanding (and currently frequent) standards of writing as well as your pure epic nature XD. Made of win.

-VL

I have a feeling that every time I write a review it's for your best chapter ever. Or something like that lol. Well I can't seem to help it, every new chapter you post is always more engaging than the last! All of your chapters in Aya's POV are my favorite anyway, but this one took the cake. This line: "Funny how the more space he gives me the more persistent my thoughts become." has to be one of the most romantic things I have ever read. I am really pleased at how fast this chapter was posted too! Thanks so much for that!

I really like the premise of this story! Aya's fairy tale fixation, Yoji kidnapping him, the circling... I must say I was relieved when the, er, rating went up, and pleased with Aya's thought process in this chapter - but, oh, Aya. Sweet, stupid Aya. For the love of God, don't go back to Tokyo! OK - I feel better for having gotten that out of my system. Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next.

i'm about to pee my pants from laughing right now. aya's **' hilarious!! i forgot how much i love this story. i kept waiting for yohji to walk in on aya doing something weird. so are we gonna get a beautiful juciy lemon sometime, or is aya just going to be masturbating a lot?

You are a grand story teller. I am in awe of you and I hate you lol. Jk. love the chapter. Aya and Yohji have a sort of an effed up sweetness when they are together. You capture it well.

Thanks for continuing this story. Seeing any of your stories update is a wonderful treat. I like your humor (though this one is darker) and that the focus is on character development, not just sex. (Not that sex can't be nice in a story but too often it seems to get used as a substitute for plot and character.)

I love this story!

Hey^^
Wow, this chapter was postet quite fast... and it´s great, i think!!
I like the fact that Aya is telling Yohji about his real name and about his self, I guess that´s really important for the relationship between them. Also I think speaking about their past helps both of them, Aya and Yohji. I guess they can understand each other better now. It´s a sign of trust that Aya told Yohji his acutal name is Ran, and Yohji´s really apreciating this... Hm, let´s see if they can come even nearer next chapter =) But I think they really get to knwo each other and to like each other (yeah, I know that Yohjihas a crush on Aya and likes him very much, but Aya seems to like Yohji as well, although he seems to have problems with admitting that^^)
So, really well written, my favourite sentence was the "Kidnapping’s an expensive hobby", Aya can be so wonderful sarcastic, that´s a thing I love about him in you story^^
I can´t wait for the story to continue, so see you at the next chapter^^
Layla

I wonder where this all is going...
*can't wait for next chap*
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