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| * 2006-04-24 ch 4, anon. | abuseI |
| PrincessPunky 2003-11-20 ch 6,  | abuseGreat story. I love Spinner/Terri fics. Well I'm off to check out that sequel.:D |
| littleshortie 2003-08-22 ch 2, anon. | abusei really wanna read ur fanfic but sorrie, i cant read it if its in one big paragraph like that. i just cant follow along. sorrie!! sounds good tho |
| Sara 2003-08-22 ch 6, | abuseIt was really cute. Just one minor detail though, Terri's mom is dead. Other than that it was great! |
| Clarissa E. 2003-08-21 ch 1, | abuseThis might be better if you used better grammar. It's all one giant run-on paragraph. |
| Sara 2003-08-21 ch 4, | abuseAw Spinner and Terri are so cute! |
| x confused girl x [signing ... 2003-08-21 ch 4, anon. | abuseahh! cliffhanger! more more! please? This is really interesting. Keep updating...please? |
| rokjai 2003-08-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseafter you get past the fact that there are no paragraphs, you can see this has great potential. try and gets some spaces in there when someone else starts talking; this will keep it from looking so cluttered. keep up the good work. ~rokjai |