i quiet liked your story, the way it was written was really good. the only thing i didn't like as much was the fact that rude seemed to have all the control as such.

...Niceness. How..did he die? Did that happen in the end of seven? Wait, couldn't have..he was there in advent children...

Godd nonetheless, even if a bit cute!

-K-

That was a very touching take on the Turks. You so rarley se anything like that. And besides, of course Cloud and Co. nevr saw the statue of Rufus. When they first invaded the tower, Rufus wasn't the president.

It's rare enough to see fics about the Turks; rarer still to see a fic where they are written in character. Keep up the good work.

Waaahhhh...I want to know what's in the box...and what the letter said. _

Chiiibi! *Applauds loudly* That was thoroughly awesome. I give it three thumbs up! *Giggles* Very, very sweet. I loved the way you portrayed the Turks. Keep writing! Or I'll be forced ta' annoy ya' till you do.. Peach! Auto

Like Delany, I believe I've read this on RPGamer before- and I loved it! Still do, actually. I especially enjoyed the whole thing with the letter to Elena, but I *was* extremely curious as to what it said...

That was sad... j.j One of the best fics I've read in a while. Great job, keep writing, and Merry Christmas! .

aww sad piece of writing, but very well written, so continue

How sad :(

I've read this befoe, on the rpgamer site, but it's still fabulous! I hope you get over your writers block soon. Keep up the great work! Dell

Awww...so sweet! Personally, I think Tseng survived, but to each their own...I like the part with Elena and the letter...This is going in my Favorites file.

Oh, I love your other fics :) Nothing wrong with this one, even if it differs from the others.. Incredible! A fic from you that I could actually read on-site! That reminds me.. I should review the other fics. Oh well.

Anyway, nice to see different kinds of fics from you, and I see nothing wrong with you writing more of this kind. (You're from Sweden too, right? *Argh* You're a much better writer than me.. *sighs*)