Great story!

I litterally love it

i really liked this and i hope you continue quickly cause i want to know what happens in the story. duh.

dude hurry up, this is like the third story u have me waiting on. I think i'm going 2 start 2 hate u if u don't hurry up any time soon

Please continue this! It is such a good storyline...PLEASE!

Great 1st chapter! That was wonderful. I hope that you update soon!! This is a really great story. I'm a big fan. ^_^

Have you done your editing homework? Good yarn, but it needs a lot of polishing. For example,

Sentence: Inu-Yasha snuck to his bedroom and tenderly lowered the quiescent girl, complete with cat, onto his bed.

Uh, yeah. Well,
1) "snuck" implies furtiveness and trying not to be found out. "tiptoed" or "silently carried the sleeping..."

2) "quiescent"? It is more like quiet submission; not putting up any defense or opposition. Wasn't she simply asleep?

3) Unlikely that cat would stay once girl picked up. More likely that cat would hiss, jump down, and young lady would be awakened.

Just a thought. Most fanfiction attempts to sound literate. Be very careful when you use words that you don't use every day. Nice job!

PLEASE UPDATE THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY IT IS THE FIRST FANFIC I EVER READ AND I LOVE IT SO PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE

This fic is awesome! You should so continue it. Update soon kay? You should so look out for my new fic, Azure sky! It's an original. Do they even have an original category anywhere?
Its about an age old prophecy that deals with a dark prince and a warrior's daughter taking down an evil king and rescue all of dragonkind! Oh and the entire human race of course.

OH!! O! O! O! O! O! PLEASE CONTINUE! I LOVE IT!

AGH! this is great! please finish!! PLEASE!

Please update soon! This is really really good!

It says that your email does not existed):I wanna send you my fanfic.

That was great! I've also read on a leash,shikon high,and more please,please*Getting on legs*right some more!THey are so good! 0__0

I love crime and spy things like this

OMG! I love this story so far! Keep up the good work! Ja ne!