 iamgoku 12/11/11 . chapter 3awesome story really you are freaking incredible that story was funny and had cool family moments especially goku and vegeta |
 heofon 3/15/05 . chapter 3Hahaha! I read this story first 4 years ago, then again 2 years ago and again now, and each time I burst out laughing on every other sentence! Fantastic hand for humour you've got there! (I'm very envious, since I'm totally useless at making jokes *weeps*)
And now I think I'll go re-read some other of your stories! - |
 Vegeta-Holic 11/10/04 . chapter 3Oh my gosh I cried at the end of this.. Right when Vegeta woke up and read the letter. This is the second story of yours to make me cry! The first one was "Fuzzyface". I cried when Goku said he wouldn't care if Veggie forze to death and Vegeta got all sad. As did I. But still, I love your fics! And actually, this shows you're a good fic writer cuz I hardly cry at all. Keep goin' for a hundred Chu, don't give up! -gives a thumbs up- |
 Afrodite 2/15/04 . chapter 3For a second there I thought it was all just a dream-was actually hoping that it was just a dream! It'd be interesting if you have a follow-up story in which Vegeta gets in contact with his 'Mommy' again. Wow, this was true Vegeta torture, lol! |
 Afrodite 2/15/04 . chapter 2Poor Vegeta! Although I think the idea for this story is priceless because of how much it torture Vegeta, it makes me a little sad because if the other Saiyans are ever brought back to life, King B and Celipa are going to be two angry former spouses (unless they get together!)
However, the idea works and I am enjoying Vegeta's rage and his relationship with his mother. How come in later stories Queen Ruby doesn't make an appearance? It'd be interesting to see what she and Bardock are up to. |
 dokichan 1/18/04 . chapter 3 Oh, the shame. my poor poor Veggie. I noticed though that your old fics are a LOT different from your new ones. Anywho, poor Vedgums, Kepp writing! |
 Afrodite 3/6/03 . chapter 1What a brilliant set-up, having Vegeta's mom in a relationship with Goku's dad! My goodness I can imagine the hysterics Vegeta will be in when he finds out!
I think it's so cute how Vegeta gets all childlike and mushy around his mommy. This story seems promising, as in promising to be another laugh-out-loud Chuquita fic. |
 Becky 11/16/02 . chapter 3 heeheehee, these certainly are amusing. One slip up, in part 1 Bulma meets "Mommy" but then she doesn't know her in part 2. |
 Rissa42 5/23/02 . chapter 2Whips... brands... and rubberbands... YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH! MENTAL IMAGE! *punches self in head repeatedly* MUST - OW - GET - OW - OUT OF - OW - HEAD! OW! There, gone now. Heh, stepbrothers... Poor Veggie! |
 Rissa42 5/23/02 . chapter 1*eyes widen slowly* Oh... My... Kami. You are EVIL! THAT WAS BARDOCK, WASN'T IT? *sprints to next chapter* |
 Mint Chips 3/27/02 . chapter 3Oh, poor, Poor, POOR Veggie-chan! |
 loving you 2/13/02 . chapter 3 awwwwwwww, i have tears in my eyes from LAUGHING too hard :_: poor, poor veggie-chan
*cackles insanely* ! *clears throat* ahem, anyway, fantastic fic - i look forward to reading more |
 Euterpe1014 8/31/01 . chapter 3another great story! i love this bejiita's mom character- very original and likeable. overall, some very cool ideas... |
 Demon King Piccolo 6/26/01 . chapter 3Hey,how was vegeta's final flash stop?Goku IS more powerful than vegeta,but everybody saw what vegeta's final flash did to perfect cell.And perfect cell was WAY more powerful than vegeta at the time.So vegeta's final flash could have disassemble goku.Did vegeta's mother stop the final flash? |
 Regina 6/26/01 . chapter 3You done it again! LOL! That was hilarious! HAHAHA! Veggie and Goku...brothers! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! The worlds insanity commences... |