 Bishounenlvr 2004-05-15 . chapter 7*sob so depressing but the story is really good. Shows that you need to sacrifice things for love.Can you make it so that Goten finds someone else? Sad endings make me sad (lol) |
 Chocolate Teddy Bear 2004-02-13 . chapter 7wow, he must be realy hurt, poor goten :( i cant wait 4 the next chappie tho, that'll make me feel less depressed for Goten :) |
 Biker Babe21 2004-01-30 . chapter 3again, considering that i hate yamcha and that vegeta is my fav. veg was just WAY too harsh. i still feel sry for poor yam. mayb ur fic is just messing w/my emotions. either that or the way im been all out of wack 2day or a combo of both. |
 Biker Babe21 2004-01-30 . chapter 1considering the fact that i hate yam. poor yam. i didnt FULLY realize what he himself went through. its kinda upsetting though. its not 1 o ur best fics but i still approve |
 xCandyApplex 2004-01-17 . chapter 1~*~Like this so far ^^! Good way to start the story. We need more Bra/Yamucha fics out there!~*~ |
 Vickychan 2004-01-10 . chapter 7aw... I feel really sorry for Yamcha and Goten... but then I think of our msn convo "arrangement" and just LAUGH! sorry I know that's cruel.
anyway, YAY! You updated! Whoohoo! I can't WAIT to read the rest, oh and THANK YOU so much for your reviews, I know you've been real busy lately and I appreciate it.
okay, gotta go do some writing now. I'm WAY behind on hwma so yeah.
Ja! |
 bellefille1 2004-01-08 . chapter 7 hehe, sorry to review so late, I've been coming home at 11:something from work, im helping my uncle during a convention for models at a hotel. man, im so tired, i couldn't check me mail at all!
Anywayz, this is a good update, nice portrayal of yamcha there, never would've expected it.
update soon vero! |
 belle-fille1 2003-10-07 . chapter 6OMG that was so ironic! That was a realy good touch there! *__*
anywayz poo-poo people refuse to review my story on fictionpress...grr...but I think I'll still update it becuz we have another short story writing assn. in my creative writing class. baka people review! sorry, letting my anger out.
Thanks for ur nice review, and omg! I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT ARNOLD SCHWARZZENEGER WON!! He's an actor! and he's now the gov. of our state! wah! |
 Maria S. 2003-10-07 . chapter 6 This is deep keeps getting even more dramatic I'm loving this! |
 Sarcastic Tone of Voice 2003-10-07 . chapter 1 Yamcha and Bra ew...* sighs * but I can't leave it at that I guess we all have our * gulps * dreams, anyways, your story is very well written and you know what I like you even more because you have the balls NOt to write another Trunks/Pan...Bulma/Vegeta its new and well written so you know what i approve, and great work, keep it up girl!
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 Vickychan 2003-10-07 . chapter 6aw...
when I read the beginning of the chapter, I thought it was sweet of Vegeta to try to apologise and kinda cruel of Bra to wind him up like that. But... now I really feel sorry for Yamcha and Goten. Vegeta was so mean in that flashback!
Oh, poor Goten... he'll find someone else, right?
Anyway, update soon! |
 Maria S. 2003-10-06 . chapter 5 I'm loving this keep going! |
 This Account Is Totally Dead 2003-09-29 . chapter 5*waves pom-poms*
Go Br/Y! Yay! I was serious when I said, way bac when, that it would be a new fad. :3
But about your flames...not many people have seen GT, huh? Bra doesn't *adore* Vegita...likes him a lot, sure, but adore? She wouldn't even see if he was alright after being attacked by Bebi-Gohan! *cough* Anyways, ignore that mini rant.
Keep up the good work! |
 Vickychan 2003-09-29 . chapter 5I LOVE IT!
I'm a little away from crying after seeing Bra and poor, heartbroken Yamcha so upset. Ah, I hated Vegeta! But then I saw how he was suffering... oh, I know he loves Bra. I guess I can forgive him ^_^
Oh, I love this fic so much!! I think this is my favourite out of your fics! Such an unusual pairing, and auch a wonderful fic!! LOVE IT!! Bra and Yamcha are so right for each other!
I pray thee, let them overcome every obsticle! No matter what, they mustn't give up! They truely are meant to be. I know it |
 discordchick 2003-09-28 . chapter 1Um...hi! Well you said no flames so...he's my opinion which is of coarse right. Bulma and Vegeta are meant to be together...forever and Trunks and Bra love their parents and are always going to be a happy family besides the fact that Yamacha is bitter because of their undying love for each other. Bra loves her dad and cant make him go shopping with her if she gets with Yamacha and...oh my god no! Anyway, totally original but totally screwed up. My opinion, not a flame. |