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| Tony 2004-01-26 ch 12, anon. | abuseI love your story. I just read the 1st chapter of Brothers Defend and that is very good. Please keep writing. Don't stop. |
| Coral Skipper 2004-01-22 ch 12, | abuseAnother excellent chapter. This story is very entertaining. |
| Louie Pastiche 2004-01-22 ch 12, anon. | abuseA fabulous ending to volume 3. I eagerly look forward to volume 4! |
| Louie Pastiche 2004-01-22 ch 11, anon. | abuseGreat way to make up for lost time! Bravo! |
| Morlin 2004-01-20 ch 12, anon. | abuseIt´s about time you got this stuff up, great as always and I can´t wait for the next installment of the qudrilogy. Whose powers dose Craig have? that´s all I wonder. Keep it up cause you da man! |
| Dapo 2003-11-24 ch 1, | abuseGalahad, I have read the previous two entries in this saga and this one is by far the best. I love the characterizations and reactions to our world. Love the idea of Nightwing and Robin finding out about the TV series, LOL!! You have got me hooked, eagerly waiting for the next installment. Nerd alert! Captain America's name is Steve Rogers not Rodgers |
| crankywonderjoe 2003-11-11 ch 10, anon. | abuseI love your stories they have great action, excellent charactrisations and have very intresting plots. But no story comes without faults I´ll just tell you what. * The Sinister Six you describe belongs pretty much to the Spider-man cartoon. Chameleon is to demented to be with the gang and Venom hates them all. A more comic SS would be Dock ock, Electro, Sandman, Vulture, Mysterio and the new Kraven. * The Satanic Seven, good name, are so not on top of the power scale in the marvel universe and Peter knows that. I mean Kingpin, Red Skull and Doom are all practicly just normal pepole and while Mags, Skrullie and the Lokster are pretty powerfull they´re no where near the strongest enties in the universe. Apocalypse may be around the top but there are still many that topple him in power. * Where was Storm in the second story I´m sure Charles would have chosen her over Gambit or Iceman. * This is more of a complaint the a blopper. Why hasn´t Peter mentioned his wife yet in any of the parts he´s in. Besides these things your story rocks and I can´t wait until the next chapter. |
| Coral Skipper 2003-11-10 ch 10, | abuseAnother good chapter. |
| Superfan 2003-11-10 ch 10, anon. | abuseAnother great chapter. Now, here are two things that might make ME sound uber-nerdish. But, I'll take my chances. First: Cap's surname is "ROGERS" (no "d"). Second: it makes sense that Nightwing's fingers hurt a little, from picking Craig's pocket. After all, in the Mother Universe, Dick Grayson should be a septugenarian! |
| Superfan 2003-11-08 ch 9, anon. | abuseVery good installment! I don't think that their pain is due to any violation of a mystical ban on using their non-super skills, however. I think it's simply the laws of Mother Universe physics catching up with our heroic travelers. For instance; Steve Rogers' muscle pull is due to throwing that shield when he's technically an octagenarian, here! |
| Coral Skipper 2003-11-07 ch 9, | abuseVery good. Keep up the good work. |
| Tony 2003-11-06 ch 8, anon. | abuseI like this story a lot. I pretty much keep checking when you update this story. I love that Teen Titans are a big part of this story. Spider-man and Nightwing should be in more stories together. Captain America is just the right amount of seasoned veteran for this story. I hope Teen Titans play a big part in this. Keep it up. |
| Zantac the Barbarian 2003-10-31 ch 8, anon. | abuseThe gunman sounds more like a disgruntled Punisher fan. You know: "Bring back WAR JOURNAL!" Oh, well. Bring on the next terrific chapter! |
| Coral Skipper 2003-10-30 ch 8, | abuseAnother good chapter. I think you may actually be able to pull off a tastefull and well done SI fic. I agree with your statement about comics. Just keep this up. |
| Red Tigress 2003-10-30 ch 8, | abuseOh, exciting! Guys robbing comiccons. No, I mean it! It's different! I can't wait to see what happens! I loved Peter's reaction "I have a movie..." Haha, great! Keep it up! |