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slashreaper
2004-12-13 . chapter 3
Amaretto! OMG! I never thought I'd find you here! I've been faithfully following your original fiction 'Rainbow' on slashfanfiction, but I didn't think you'd write FANfiction, much less Yami no Matsuei! And like that story which I love and you seem to have discontinued, 'In the Garden' is delightfully WAFFy without being too trite and impossible. I love it. Keep up the great job, and do tell me if you're planning to continue 'Rainbow', and where I can find it.
Genghis Khan
2004-08-27 . chapter 3
Oh! you must up-date *bows* please please!! I love this coupling so much! *bounces* please please!!
Nevyn
2003-11-08 . chapter 3
*grin* and he just cuts him off. perfect way to end that. don't need to wirte anything more when it is so clear. what i'd liek ta read now is a story that's parallel to this one. what's going on with Tsuzuki and Hisoka? that'd be interesting. and mybe this one could have one more part, though, it really doesn't need. very good job. *smiles brightly*
Nevyn
2003-11-08 . chapter 2
are they related? i think this is turning into a nice coupleing fic. and i have no idea how they should act for i do not know them as well, so i think that they are being very intersting. this story is very good. i really liek it so far. good job so far. i really still don't understand why they say that Tsuzuki is not the best worker there. Being able to control the four gods is no easy task.
Nevyn
2003-11-08 . chapter 1
i haven't finsihed the manga, so i have no idea if they are human in appearence in the books, but if they aren't i liek your descriptions of their cloths. usually writers make clothes should boring, but you did a good job, just descripbing enough to give detail and not go over board. very good.
yes, Tsuzuki wanted to die. and i think i understand why, but he had so much to live for. and if they continue the series someday, he'd have even more to live for becasue there is no doubt that he and hisok would finally get together.
i liked this chapter and hope that you finish the sotry. there are so many unfinished stories out there involving Yami no Matsuei.
muchacha
2003-10-24 . chapter 3
Not much stories about shikigami relations! A first time reading this couple, and I think I like it~! O.o WOW! Oh...new couple to fuss over~!
Yanagi-sen
2003-10-23 . chapter 3
LMAO... I love the ending... we all know what happened next (something ff.net won't let us post anymore). Very cute... we need more shiki fics!
Ashen Skies
2003-10-13 . chapter 3
^^ very nice! the ending was really sweet, and i just loved the confrontation between byakko and suzaku - astute observations made in there. a very nice story, really sad it's over... or is it? please write more! a sequel would be great!
Hagane
2003-10-08 . chapter 3
real sweet! only i'm a bit startled at this side of suzaku- i've always thought her so bright and fiery, just not so...unreasonable? man. that was a dampener...but i like the way things are going nevertheless...more?
Downdilly
2003-10-08 . chapter 3
Honestly, I tried to find something to not like about it (except for there not being more), and the only thing was a little, tiny nit to pick; it's waist, not waste.

Beautiful, beautiful piece. Thank you.
Under the Oak Tree
2003-10-07 . chapter 1
Not bad...not bad at all...maybe we'll see more of you in the Yami section then?
mai-san
2003-10-06 . chapter 3
*is fully dressed in yaoi fan clothing* WE! That was great. I hope you're not a procrastinator like me and you'll update soon...*checks the rating*... Ya, know... You are fully capable of kicking that pathetic PG to an R with no problems in no time. NO, I'm not-...okay, I AM suggesting you to write a lemon for this fic. If you do, I'll draw you a picture! Onega~i!
Rebel
2003-10-05 . chapter 3
haha.. loved it! was real witty and sweet too! =]
Azure Phantom
2003-10-05 . chapter 3
CTFA- WAH! *ultra Squeal*
Vince- ARgh! *covers ears* someone shut her up!
Payu- Ohohoho I have the greatest Idea! *tries to kiss Boogie-chan*
Vince- O.O *hits her* LET GO!
CTFA- *ignored them completely* PLEASE I LOVE THIS! UPDATE SOON! IT'S AMAZING!
Payu- You idiot I almost managed to kiss her!
Vince- you lesbo creep leave Boogie alone!
CTFA- ONEGAI ONEGAI! UPDATE! But, just one thing, I don't know why but I find the TOuda-seme kinda er... dunno. I just dun like it much! So please! make him the uke! XD Onegai?
Vince- YOU INSANE B*!! *hits Payu*
Payu- DIE YOU STUPID GAY-MONSTER! *hits Vince and both of them start to fight*
CTFA- You have my full support! Keep it up!
mai-san
2003-08-27 . chapter 1
Aw...I never expected such a pairing! But it was good to see a different one!^^...um, was this a one-shot? You didn't mention if it was one or not. Anyways, please write a sequel to this or another fic with this pairing.
Oh! And I'd like to thank you for showing how bitchy Suzaku was to Touda! How can she hate someone that hot?!
Update soon, ne?
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