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Anniina
2007-06-10
ch 1,
abuseI hope Ash and Misty get mawwied :D
Ash Eyes
2006-02-27
ch 1,
abusecute! and if u read between the lines then u will see the romance! either that, or im making up the romance to satisfy my on perosnal satisfaction... hmm, anyways, very well written but i tottaly think u should continue ur unitentionally betrayed!
Katie
2005-09-07
ch 1, anon.
abusehey, yall! I liked it, yo! It was off the heezy! You are now my oficial Home Skillit Biscut! Na, I'm just jokin'! I'm not really a weird talkin' pers'n. Nope. I'm a good talki' pers'n. Ok, ok. Let me talk right. I liked it a whole lot! It was cute, and funny! I liked the ending!:"Did I shay sometin woeng?" Oh! So funny, so funny...Well, keep on writting!
TTFN
PianoPlaya ^_~
Dragoness
2004-02-25
ch 1,
abuse*^.^*; How cute. Um...Lol, just...very cute. *sweatdrops* That was cuter than a lot of aamls I've read actually. Somehow.. I think the ending does the trick. *^_^*; Ahh...Yup. Those poor little twerps.. Ehehee, and Misty trying to figure out what to do with that awful picture.. *>u<*; Umm.. lol.. Nice job *^_^*;; Just dun tell Suplica stuff. Right. *nods* *^_^*;; Um.. Tat's all! *^_^*;
AkaOkamiRyu
2003-11-23
ch 1,
abuseIf you have ever been to Northeastern wisconsin you might think hell did freeze over, but anyway great story.
Brock's Geodude
2003-11-08
ch 1,
abuseHey there! Long time no see! This is Geodude from BGF, SNF, etc...haven't seen you or your fics on Bulbagarden for a long time! I know it's down but the forums are still going strong at the alternate address (http://64.191.32.50/~bulbagar/bmgf/) in case you didn't know.

Very nice fic! Totally IC, and I could see it happening in the show. Two questions though:

a) Where's Brock?
2) Where are May and Max?

But I can see how you wanted to keep it simple by excluding them. I noticed a few spelling mistakes (misspellings of Hoenn and Treecko come to mind), but overall this was another good fic from you. Now go review some of mine! :p
Sydney
2003-09-06
ch 1, anon.
abuselol this was a funny story!
Barbara LeMaster
2003-08-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseYOu've always had a talent for writing comedy but I loved the dramatic bits in this fic, such as when Misty tells Ash to get over himself. We all need a push once in a while and it's completely in character for Ash and Misty to help each other out. Another great fic.
Kit Kat
2003-08-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh!! Very cute story! I just loved the end!
I hope you write more AAML's. You capture their emotions perfectly.
AAML 4ever ^-^
Raichu
2003-08-22
ch 1,
abuseLoved the story! Faithful to the anime, yet plenty of originality too.

No, Koriku, the story ends perfectly the way it is. A sequel might spoil it.
Koriku
2003-08-22
ch 1,
abuseTHAT WAS SO FUNNY! RASH! BISTY! SUPLICA! XDXDXD This fic is HILARIOUS! =D I love that cute little girl at the end XDXDXD And yes you silly, of COURSE hell froze over! =D Didn't you hear? Last Sunday there was a blizzard there! *gives Togepretty a weird newspaper*

You should continue this or write a sequel or write something else like it or something! =D

~Koriku the Hyper
Ashla
2003-08-21
ch 1,
abuseHeehee. I liked that story ^^ Good job on that! Can't wait for more of your stories ^^ Keep up the good work!
~Ashla~
nora88
2003-08-21
ch 1,
abuseHahaha. I thought that was great. Especially the end.
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