 Steveaaml 2009-07-08 . chapter 1SOo cute, and super funny, and aww, I love the friendship!
"Of course, Duplica's version of the pact was a lot simpler and not nearly as emotional. Plus, it had a lot of cool Ditto transformations," <-Really funny. |
 Mrs.NateRiver 2008-10-06 . chapter 1I thought it was sweet and who knows this mught be a possibility. ;i) cute. |
 Anniina 2007-06-10 . chapter 1I hope Ash and Misty get mawwied :D |
 Ash Eyes 2006-02-27 . chapter 1cute! and if u read between the lines then u will see the romance! either that, or im making up the romance to satisfy my on perosnal satisfaction... hmm, anyways, very well written but i tottaly think u should continue ur unitentionally betrayed! |
 Katie 2005-09-07 . chapter 1 hey, yall! I liked it, yo! It was off the heezy! You are now my oficial Home Skillit Biscut! Na, I'm just jokin'! I'm not really a weird talkin' pers'n. Nope. I'm a good talki' pers'n. Ok, ok. Let me talk right. I liked it a whole lot! It was cute, and funny! I liked the ending!:"Did I shay sometin woeng?" Oh! So funny, so funny...Well, keep on writting!
TTFN
PianoPlaya ^_~ |
 Dragoness 2004-02-25 . chapter 1*^.^*; How cute. Um...Lol, just...very cute. *sweatdrops* That was cuter than a lot of aamls I've read actually. Somehow.. I think the ending does the trick. *^_^*; Ahh...Yup. Those poor little twerps.. Ehehee, and Misty trying to figure out what to do with that awful picture.. *>u<*; Umm.. lol.. Nice job *^_^*;; Just dun tell Suplica stuff. Right. *nods* *^_^*;; Um.. Tat's all! *^_^*; |
 AkaOkamiRyu 2003-11-23 . chapter 1If you have ever been to Northeastern wisconsin you might think hell did freeze over, but anyway great story. |
 Brock's Geodude 2003-11-08 . chapter 1Hey there! Long time no see! This is Geodude from BGF, SNF, etc...haven't seen you or your fics on Bulbagarden for a long time! I know it's down but the forums are still going strong at the alternate address (http://64.191.32.50/~bulbagar/bmgf/) in case you didn't know.
Very nice fic! Totally IC, and I could see it happening in the show. Two questions though:
a) Where's Brock?
2) Where are May and Max?
But I can see how you wanted to keep it simple by excluding them. I noticed a few spelling mistakes (misspellings of Hoenn and Treecko come to mind), but overall this was another good fic from you. Now go review some of mine! :p |
 Sydney 2003-09-06 . chapter 1 lol this was a funny story! |
 Barbara LeMaster 2003-08-30 . chapter 1 YOu've always had a talent for writing comedy but I loved the dramatic bits in this fic, such as when Misty tells Ash to get over himself. We all need a push once in a while and it's completely in character for Ash and Misty to help each other out. Another great fic. |
 Kit Kat 2003-08-23 . chapter 1 Oh!! Very cute story! I just loved the end!
I hope you write more AAML's. You capture their emotions perfectly.
AAML 4ever ^-^ |
 Raichu 2003-08-22 . chapter 1Loved the story! Faithful to the anime, yet plenty of originality too.
No, Koriku, the story ends perfectly the way it is. A sequel might spoil it. |
 Koriku 2003-08-22 . chapter 1THAT WAS SO FUNNY! RASH! BISTY! SUPLICA! XDXDXD This fic is HILARIOUS! =D I love that cute little girl at the end XDXDXD And yes you silly, of COURSE hell froze over! =D Didn't you hear? Last Sunday there was a blizzard there! *gives Togepretty a weird newspaper*
You should continue this or write a sequel or write something else like it or something! =D
~Koriku the Hyper |
 Ashla 2003-08-21 . chapter 1Heehee. I liked that story ^^ Good job on that! Can't wait for more of your stories ^^ Keep up the good work!
~Ashla~ |
 nora88 2003-08-21 . chapter 1Hahaha. I thought that was great. Especially the end. |