I'm Not The Weakest Link 2004-10-05 . chapter 1my cousin (bookworm04) recommended you to me, and this story is so great! |
bookworm04 2004-03-21 . chapter 4Please update. |
bookworm04 2003-12-14 . chapter 5hi your story is really good update cos u havnt in ages.asap!Oh yeah read my story...plz??
So anyway update update UPDATE!UPDATE! |
Drei Elles 2003-11-28 . chapter 5Good Good. Keep up the good work;)
l8er
Lisa(Crazily insane one, hehe) |
kiki,the girl who has that lava now 2003-10-21 . chapter 5 Hi bookworm
My sister gave me her lava.She typed that.I will never come out of my hating-peter binge as TWO WHOLE MARAUDERS ARE DEAD BECAUSE OF HIM!I like your stery so far.ttfn
Kiki |
hermionecaz 2003-10-20 . chapter 5 lol, hey! yep i'm a she!
lovely chapter again! (okay, not the longest of chapters, but still very well written!!)
more story soon
carriexx |
Theaphelia 2003-10-16 . chapter 5I like the way it's coming out. Keep writing!
I don't think if you replace a chapter that the reviews will disappear. I updated every chapter of my *ONLY* serious story, 'to freeze my heart solid', and I still have all my reviews.
As I said before, it sounds almost like Rowling herself wrote it, just don't forget to reveal Harry's thoughts and feelings.
I also like the idea of a MWPP story, anything funny is interesting to me.
I did something similar once, on the way to my band christmas concert me and my friend stopped random people and said stuff like "Merry Hanukkah" and "Season's Greetings." We also hugged some of them.
That was the best time I ever had preparing for a band concert. |
Theaphelia 2003-10-03 . chapter 4I like your story. Keep writing it whenever you can find the time. It almost sounds like something Rowling would write!
The only thing is, try and show the way he's feeling a bit more, like his reactions to stuff. How did it make him feel that fred and george had dedicated a section to him? Definitely add something that he'll write in the new diary.
Keep up the good work! |
hermionecaz (haven't signed in!!) 2003-10-02 . chapter 4 hey! lol, i love the story so thats why i reviewed again. (3 times now!!) can't wait for the next chapter.
luv hermionecaz |
Drei Elles 2003-09-22 . chapter 3Hey! this is really good and i think you should continue with it:D anyway update soon and remember to check wihth our story to see if we've updated it. L8er/peace
Lisa |
Sw33tyPrincessFaerie 2003-09-13 . chapter 3yes well, it was short but... sure it was okay. And yes they did take the OWLs in June, I really have good memory don't I? But then I suppose I remembered it cuz I reread it like 5 times already... heh heh read my fanfic, it's currently got 3 chapters and a total of 140 and some more words in it! hehe hehe...
And well I was thinking about the Potions grade...it should either be really bad (as Harry deserved) or really really good like an O, you kno, cuz like maybe something weird happened... okay well thaz it...
Oh yes I almost forgot... this is something I'm predicting that ur thinking about: You want Snape to teach DADA and someone else to take Potions, someone that accepts students into his/her Potions class with grades higher tthan A. At lease, that's what I think should happened... well bye!
Oh yes and ur on my favorite author list! |
hermionecaz 2003-09-08 . chapter 3hey!
I think that you should totally keep going. I love it!! :) |
DoGGie WaNdeRer 2003-09-08 . chapter 3U HAVE TO CONTINUE ON! YOU JUST HAVE TOO... YOU REALLY HAVE DONE A GREAT JOB! SO DO PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY, PLEASE?! |
hermionecaz 2003-09-06 . chapter 1YEAH!! YOU SHOULD DEFINETELY KEEP WRITING, IT'S FANTASTIC. MORE STORY PLEASE? |
Sw33tyPrincessFaerie 2003-09-06 . chapter 2Oh it's really good! and the store is in Diagon Alley, just to assure you, and you should definitely continue. and please read my story? it's like really long tho... heh heh...continue okay? |