that was certainly disturbing...in a good way..
u wanted it to be sensual, i think that u've achieved ur goal
well done

Wah! You should've made it longer!

Well, this is a good fic, but it's too short for those two amazing characters! But I like it!^^

^_^

lol i was thinking wat "be" is...
of course there's basis of this pairing (... not much... but from what i've seen from the anime they seemed to know each other a long time before)
My... there've been a lot of TezuAto lately~ Atobe uke! yay!!