Beautiful fic. But I don't really like angst myself.

This is a very lyrical sort of fic. I like the way you wrote it. Keep up the good work. Maybe you could try your hand at a less serious fic.

Very touching. I have to say I enjoyed it very much, much like the last fic of yours that I read. It's a very deep look into Katou's mind. Usually, I hate first person, but for you it really does work. Great characterization, great style, all around a great fic. =3

Wow! It's a masterpiece!^_^ V. romantic in a discrete way. I lk it! Plz write more Kira/Kato ficcies. They'r awsome!

I usually have a hell of a lot to say. Tough critic like myself usually does.

Not this time. I'll say only; this is completely, utterly beautiful. Thank you for writing it.

That was so good...

Hey i really liked this. Um, it was not intense in a physical sort of way but it was touching!
Keep writing!
^_^

Beautifully written, describing a very complex and complicated relationship in a wonderfully touching way. You wrote Katou's pov very well, and I liked it especially because it let Kira's thoughts and feelings remain a bit of a mystery, a bit of a surprise. A highly enjoyable read. ^-^

Oh...my... This is such a beautifully written piece! There's a severe lack of Kira/Katou stories out there--keep it up! ^_^

oh my god! that was so sad...>.

I love it. It's beautyfully written and kind of fitting for Kato... I sometimes wished Kira really was like that...

*staring in shock* o


Pretty. I really loved your flowing words and how you placed them together. Im a big KatouxKira lover, and ih ave to say this is one of the BEST ive ever read! Definate favorite.

I've only watched the ova, and I have no access (as far as I know) to the manga, so I'm still unfamiliar with these characters. I must say, though, that this was beautifully written! I'll bet I'll feel even more "Aww, how sweet!" when I finally figure out who these people are ^^

That was very nice. I really liked it. I hope you will continue writing AS stories. ^_^