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Nachzes-Black Rider
2004-04-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseum, so, is Mokuba dead already? Sorry, well... yeah, I guess he would be. Hmm, liked it, now that I've sorta-kinda cleared that up. Look foreward to chapter 12 of Negative Chaos. But that was a realy evil cliffhanger.
Toboe LoneWolf
2003-09-17
ch 1,
abuseArgg...I have FINALLY gotten my hands onto a computer...

My parents are so strict with the internet. They only give me 30 min a month. How in the world can I write a decent review in like three minutes?!? So again, so sorry I took so long. -_- Parents...

This is like the perfect fic to let me rant. >.< Rachel's parents's might not let her go to a concert, but mine won't even let me WRITE! They get so mad at me when I write a dinky paragraph that isn't school-related that they like squash me. Arrgh...I know school is important and all, but please, let me be myself! Writing is part of my life! As Patrick Henry said, "Give me liberty or give me death!" (You know, that's a good quote for the Oposition...)

Yeah, so in theory this fic is supposed to make me grateful for everything that I have. And in a way, I do. But still...writing is a part of me I've kept bottled up for too long. IT NEEDS OUT. I need a Kaze in the real world to let me be.

Kaze: But I'm right here.
LoneWolf16: Unfortuneately, you're in a different Realm than me. FF.net is the portal between my world and yours.
Kaze: That's weird...

So yeah, I guess Rachel's kinda like me right now. Kudos to you on her characterization; made her alive. I only wish that there was a Kaze here too. ^^ See you around!
Trey Miller (not signed in)
2003-09-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseImpressive. I really enjoyed how you expressed Kaze in the story. I mean, I agree that he'd have a different outlook in life.

Keep up the good work.
A Ferret Called Silver
2003-09-05
ch 1,
abuseYa know, that's a really good moral story thingy.
Update Negative Chaos soon? *looks at contest entries, and wonders off muttering about competition being way too good and where'd her plot bunny go*
Trinity Star and Her Muses
2003-09-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseTS: *Gathering weapons to kill someone at ff.net*

Sarisie: I'll explain. TS has you on author alert so when you post a story or chapter she gets an e-mail. and if you culdn't tell she didn't get an e-mail. She checks your accout regularly to see if you've updated.

Kalla: Before she left to kill someone she left this for me to read:

Loved this story, and the moral was great. And you like Wild Child? That's my FAVORITE Enya song.

Kyo: *Trying to hold TS back from killing someone*
Come on!

TS: SOMEONE'S GONNA DIE AND IT AIN'T GONNA BE ME OR TS!

Serya: Well we can't die unless TS dies so...

Sarisie: WE LIVE!! *starts to celebrate*

TS: *Goes to beat something up*

Kyo: BYE!
Wingleader Sora Jade
2003-08-31
ch 1,
abuseWHEE!! *spins around happily on one foot* Now THAT was mega-cool!! KAZE-ME-LOVE!! *glomps Kaze*

Kaze: X( Not again...

Wai!! That is so cool!! You know, that's really true. No one ever stops to *love* anymore... Thsi is really great HCG-san, awwesome job! *thumbs up*
bakurakrazie
2003-08-28
ch 1,
abuseB/k: feh, morals. i like insane-ness, but you were never really one for insanity though *shrugs* although you could have a great mind for it. Ja!
Silver Fang's Revenge
2003-08-27
ch 1,
abuse*walks in with sodas for reviewers* I'm going to use breaks this time Or try! If not, this will be confusing ^_^;
That wasen't weird. THAT WAS GREAT!
I didn't like Kaze too mcuh before this.. but now I do. He's so smart ^_^ (and handsome!!)
Kaze/Kaiba fangirls: -..-+
SFRevenge: EEp! I um... gotta go HGC! *runs away with fangirls chasing her with mallets* --formerly SilverFang (8)
Daricio
2003-08-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was... different. ^_^

I noticed quite a few art analogies in there... "paintings" and such.

I dunno. Personally, if I were in that situation, I would have been more confused than anything by Kaze's little speech there...

(course, I would be way to shy to talk to anybody I didn't know, and haven't found a good enough reason to run away from home yet, either)

Darika: *blink* Does that mean that-

Daricio: Yup. You should.

Darika: Well, I don't wanna run away from home, but I'm definitely not shy, that's for sure. *goes up to random person and begins bugging them*

Daricio: O.o I'm NOT related to her... I'm not, I'm not, I'm not... ^_^U

Darika: ^_^

Daricio: Anyways... Very interesting random ficcie you got here. ^_^ Got to go.. see ya!

--Daricio
Aibou2 (Too lazy to log in)...
2003-08-23
ch 1, anon.
abuse::cries:: Wah!! ;_; Such a wonderful mini fic! *sniff* So touching! ::clings to Kaze:: Kaze's so caring and he's smart and kawaii and wonderful and... WAH!! ;_; We must clone him so there are more people in the world like him. ^^; Whe!

^A i b o u~
Ebony Kuroneko
2003-08-22
ch 1,
abuseWhoo! *Claps* This story is very thought-provoking! Kaiba/Kaze's got the right idea, totally! Sure wish there were more people that were as wise as him in the world.
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