OMG! I LAUGHT MY ** OF MAKE THE NEXT ONE SO BETTER! MAKE THE NEXT ONE JUICY! OMG! MAKE HIM WANT TO KILL EVERBODY! HAVE NO PITTY!

please!!please!!please!!please!please!please!!please!please!!
update this story is beyond hilarious and I must read more..03..boo-hoo it's 08 get up-to-date and update..lolz

Two things:

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You are hillarious, girl, this is owesome!

Poor Seshomaru!! wahahahahahahahaha (etc)

To be honest, I liked the story but I never thought too much about Seshomaru or his lil bro (muajajaja). Now, with your fanfic, I can't help but to love Seshomaru, he is REALLY gorgeous

2. Sesshoumaru remembered that they were both naked and he couldn’t get out of the water without showing Rin all from his perfect, godlike, and (most of all) GROWNUP MALE body.

WHY ON EARTH DID YOU STOP YOUR DESCRIPTION OF SESHOMARU?
I was thinking, oh god, HIS PERFECT, GODLIKE, GROUWNUP MALE BODY, I'M IN HEAVEN! (es un papacito!: he's gorgeous!!)

wahahahahahahaha!

I know,Rin is a little girl, she wouldn't understand (o maybe SHE undertands everything and she's just faking)

Anyway, PLEASE, keep writing, PLEASE!

P.S: I send my greetings to your translator, if she hadn't translated this fic to Spanish, I wouldn't have read it both in Spanish and in English. She's doing a good job.

PP.SS: HAPPY BIRTHDAY GIRL! HOPE YOU CELEBRATED WITH SESHOMARU

that story was really cute! I don't understand why it needed a 'M' rating, though. all the same, good job, and happy belated birthday!

LOL Favs! I think it would be funny if Rin lost Shesshomaru's fluff, just to see hoe he'd react, maybe that'd only be funny in my lil' world but... LOL

i laughed so hard! i think it just so funny when ppl wright about Rin asking Sesshomaru those questions. i hope you will wright more about the love question i really want to see Sesshomaru's reaction!

i laughed so friggin hard! i love when rin acts like the little stupid kid she is! it totally embarasses everyone but her! poor jaken..."the victim of a heart attack"LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!

It was cute! Really Weird just cause of the age difference but I just really like Rin! She is a cute little girl and always has questions! Good Job!

...wait..O.o.y is this rated M again?..very cute. ja~

Ah ! ^o^ that's the funniest thing that I have ever read! omg it's the top! keep it, just continu this story that so funyy

*excuse me my english is so wrong!*

Hahahaha I would have loved to hear how he would explain 'that'!!

XD

HAHAHAHAHA! YES!

I wish Sesshoumaru would teach ME how to throw rocks correctly.

--wink wink--

X3

no! you have to update! it is such a great story
! i love it addin to faves

again, hysterical! you did a great job displaying Sesshomaru's annoyance and Jaken and Rin's constant bickering over the tiniest things. great job and continue the good work. arigato!

wow. that was hysterical! i can totally see rin asking those kind of questions. you should definately make a sequal to this. that would be awesome.