this is the first book to make me cry. i don't know why you don't have more reviews. i felt this story. great ending. and great concept with the paper stars. loved it so much.

Wow. It's like a miracle for him to get to save her just in time :)

oh oh ehm geeee! love it, PLEASE WRITE MORE!

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KAWAIIII! Please tell me what happened with the baka! As in the insane, mental, killer yori!

AWWWWW. IT IS SO GOOOOOD!

I feel so light headed right now! Its finished already!

Nice story!

Congratulations!

SOOOOO GOOD! Congratulations! Continue inspiring people with ur work! Be careful of some grammatical errors though.

Anyway, I looooove your story! More to come!

This story is so good. Wow. Good job!

Love the beginning!

amazing story..it was so..real how you wrote everything..!

and i loved the whole 'Paper Stars' concept..it was adorable...

the ending... Omg..i think im gonna cry...it was Sooo Sweet!perfect ending for an awesome story! loved it!

That was kinda creepy but so awesome at the same time...IDK? I mean Sakura being so..out of it was really creepy but at the end it was good. I wish i could strangle Yori and just..BLAH! Anyway, this story is a SUCCESS!

I would've reviewed each chapter, but there are fourteen chapters and I wouldn't have made sense with me blabbering on and on about what I thought about each chapter. So this should sum it up.

I like the OC you inserted. He wasn't the kind of presence that directed the focus away from the main characters, unlike other OCs out there.

I also like the idea for the paper stars. I always did like them; paper stars, I mean. And insanity. Insanity is a place I feel like anyone could step into at any moment if their shell breaks. It's just great.

I suppose I noticed a few errors here and there. Slight grammar/typographical mistakes, and the like. But there wasn't that many of them, and none of them really stirred the attention away from the story itself.

The beginning is really beautiful. It gets you intrigued and keeps you reading the story. The middle part gets a bit ..how do I put it, it isn't dull or boring, because a lot of interesting things were still happening, but the excitement/thrill dropped from the opening, which is a bit of a let-down. However, it gets better progressively, and the ending is magnificent. (And it made me squeal.)

All in all, you did a great job. Even though it's an AU, the characters were still as they usually are, and it's just great :)

(Oh, and sorry for the superbly long review.)

You're an awesome writer! Everything seemed real, the way you wrote it-especially how Sakura started going insane. This has got to be one of the most thrilling stories I've ever read, and original too. :D Keep up the good work!

Wow, just wow. All I can say is this is the best fanfic I've ever read, I'm serious. I didn't want it to end, because it was so perfect. You write beautifully. This story stirred emotions in me I don't understand. I cried, I laughed. I will be able to read this story again and again.

Thank you so much for contributing such a beautiful story.

Oh... This is good... Onwards!

- PrincessxShawn

Wow. This was so... Awesome. Yes.

I hate Yori, but not really, because it's mostly his parent's fault, ne? But he's kinda a bi*ch too, because he thought Sakura would still love him after he beat her. Psh! She is not your mother!

Overall good plot, good words, good ending.

I am speechless with awe.

This is absolutely fantastic. It takes a very talented writer to portray such emotions, to express Sakura's descent into madness so realistically and to write such a powerful, moving story and you have done this to perfection.

I think the only thing you need to do is edit a bit more carefully...? Because there were a few spelling mistakes. But that's not important :D

Your writing is brilliant. Everything about this is brilliant. It's unique, moving, powerful...I won't repeat myself. Argh, I'm still speechless.

The ending made me cry :) I am SO glad that I found this story and I'm going to favourite this. This is the first fanfics that had affected me so much - you know, it's made me cry, laugh, gasp and do all at the same time as well :)

Sorry for such a jumbled review. I'm still incoherent with amazement at such a FANTASTIC story. Looking forward to reading more of your stories! You're very talented. _