 norah-hunt 2003-08-23 . chapter 1very good. but what's the contest response is it? i vaguely remeber something like that but...if you wouldn't mind clearing that up for me. by the way, your stories brilliant so far..but what's happening? i think you should explain a bit more as to what's going on. eg: what mission was Obi on?, who was that woman who was frightened and why was the mansion attacked? |