 Cryngle 1/27/10 . chapter 1Wow...that was sweet, I really sympathize with Joyce here. You really found her voice, I think and loved that you actually linked some common ground with B/J. They lacked that in the actual show because so much had happened already and Buffy trying to keep from disappointing her. |
 Nightcrawlerlover 12/13/09 . chapter 1This is really fantastic! I like the idea of amber beads too. :)
Passing by her grounded older daughter's room, she heard soft
sounds coming from within. She approached the door and heard
Buffy's half of the conversation.
"Yes, he came... through the window." Pause. "Don't ask what
you don't want to know, Wills!... No! You and your dirty
mind!" Laughs. "We just talked and stuff. Yes, through the
window... Because I'm grounded, duh!"
Joyce smiled. She really should go in and berate her daughter
for breaking the rules. But the truth was, Buffy was scaring
her with her erratic behaviour and escapades. To hear her
talking about a teenage crush with calm, nice, down-to-earth
Willow was a real relief.
She heard quiet giggles from inside the room and caught an
unbelievable happy whisper. "Isn't he the best, Willow?"
Joyce smiled for the last time. Weren't they all the best at
one point?, she thought, still feeling a light weight on her
ankle.
She only hoped that Buffy would never count amber beads, too.
Brilliant! Very deep and creative.
Keep up your awesome, superb writing! :) |