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| Alex B. Goode 2007-09-16 ch 2, | abuseCome on. Keep writing it. |
| Jo Z. Pierce 2006-09-30 ch 2, | abuseSo, does he? Keep writing... keep writing!! I gotsta know! |
| Macri007 2005-10-29 ch 2, | abusecool add more |
| Phoebe Buttercup 2005-04-12 ch 2, | abusegreat work! too bad it will never be finished. I would have liked to see what happened |
| Blado 2004-09-27 ch 2, | abuseThat was good, but short. I read the first one too, and it was kind of short. If by parts, you mean episodes, I think both parts together would only make it up to one commercial. There has to be an out come, and a struggle he goes through. I'd like to see more! :) |
| dixiedreams 2004-09-02 ch 2, anon. | abusevery good but dont forget the humor that people are lookin for from archie even in a tragic situation |
| Docnov121955 2003-09-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseare you going to continue? you have to i cant wait to read more |
| Alameda 2003-09-10 ch 1, | abuseyou are right on track with there with all of there personalities. this is great please more Lindsey |
| DJneo24 2003-08-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was good... you have the charicters down pat... i can't wait to see what's next! |