Great. Keep it going.

Come on. Keep writing it.

So, does he? Keep writing... keep writing! I gotsta know!

cool add more

great work! too bad it will never be finished. I would have liked to see what happened

That was good, but short. I read the first one too, and it was kind of short. If by parts, you mean episodes, I think both parts together would only make it up to one commercial. There has to be an out come, and a struggle he goes through. I'd like to see more! :)

very good but dont forget the humor that people are lookin for from archie even in a tragic situation

are you going to continue? you have to i cant wait to read more

you are right on track with there with all of there personalities. this is great please more

Lindsey

That was good... you have the charicters down pat... i can't wait to see what's next!